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🕑 Added 2022-05-12 17:59:16 +0000 UTCI found these scans and thought it might be interesting to see for people who like Nova's comic.
SKETCH 1 -
shows Bandi finally joining Nova's crew as soldier, finally ending his training.
dialogs were something like "I'm finally not just the family let-down (or dissapointment)"
"I'm always at your shadow, sister" and Nova saying something like "never say something like that, you following me and helping me is just making us both stronger"
SKETCH 2 -
Shows the page and similar dialog, and was the one picked for release, when Bandi is just a kid and is frustrated because he can't do the things Nova does, and he wants to help her.
I made these two pages as ideas for adding more "emotional connection" between Bandi and Nova, these pages just go "in-between" the comic I originally made, as memories, just to add more flavor to the characters, these were made after the comic was completed, so it's sort of like adding extra pages to it.
just an attempt to "patch" the story a little, before this I focused too much in the ideas of the story themselves, and core factors of the characters, but the action, concepts and events I wanted to show in the story made me focus much on that and less in adding situation for the character interactions, a flaw I tried to fix in "the void 4-5" comics, and I'm trying to improve in Derideal new episodes.
