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🕑 Added 2021-12-31 14:24:16 +0000 UTCHey! here's the sketch version of this new page...
I tried to progress this story as fast as I could, sometimes it was necessary to make a page with many panels... but I think the sequence works good, and you can get the idea of she running away.
I wanted to show how naive and reckless Nova could be... she got her own temper and also needed to learn some lessons, which is the whole "theme" of this story, things will probably get interesting in the next pages!
it also a way for me to show you other time Bandi saw Nova and gave him an example, he admire his sister quite a lot, and there have been many times where he compared to her and always felt he wasn't enough, for many different reasons, Nova seemed to be better, faster, intelligent and above all... her own person, despite her being following a path set to her since she was a kid.
art-wise, I'm not sure if I got to make the characters the way I wanted, I get trouble making more cute and simple art, so I think the characters in this story look a little more complex than I wanted heh, Derideal is to blame.
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