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🕑 Added 2021-11-29 21:31:19 +0000 UTCThis page gave me nightmares, as I found so difficult to convey two actions at the same time...
1 - C Wally shooting Laura
2 - Aden and the bot getting inside the elevator
I really hope the page read as I wanted, the 4th panel is sort of "pasted" in the original script, as I re-made this panel on paper long time ago. ugh
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As this thing in the general story, in the original this same thing "sort of" happened, as Laura was also with Andrés (the technician) in the original, but their story happened behind under the main plot line following "Adres" (now Aden)
This time I had everyone in the same spot, I had to do some sacrifices in the story, I think the remake ended up having more errors that I'm willing to accept, but it's the best I could do at the time.
Anyway, the reason I'll be updating twice per week is because here the ending starts, just as it started in the equivalent part in the original "legacy" version.
original sketch:
