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Derideal 5-11 WIP + BLOG
🕑 Added 2021-07-12 17:38:43 +0000 UTCHey, this page mark the interaction between the rebels and Aden+Laura.
for the remake, I decided to take away much of the relevance the rebels had in the original, this was mosly done because of the lenght of the comic, it is already too long... and it was almost impossible to finish.
my idea was to use the rebels to justify the big assault the Consortium suffers in the original comic, and explain why they felt it was necesary, it is still a key event for the series... but this is where the story changes a lot from the original, as you'll see in the next pages.
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I had such a big trouble figuring out a way to layout the pages, so I tried to make a new single big panel with more background scenery that could simplify must of the stuff in the original scan... I just didn't liked the way I was telling this part.
ORIGINAL:
drawings were too poor and quickly made, Laura had a long dialog explaining what was happened.
las panel when Paladin is shown was more similar to the original panel when they first meet in Derideal legacy.
REVISED SKETCH
the idea of this was to guide a little better readability and add more dynamism to the poses.
LINEART
this is the actual lineart of the page, I later decided to bring back a close-up view of the server room in the first panel too, I hope the page works
thank you for reading
