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Trial Fic (Part 3)

🕑 Added 2023-04-30 16:20:14 +0000 UTC

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I see... Btw, can you describe what part you found disgusting about mc? Him having Qinghuang as slave or having sex with her? Or having her eat his liver? I would really appreciate if you can provide detail analysis so I can try to improve it. Though I am indeed writing a True Neutral MC who barely has any moral compass going on for him, it's always in the center for him. "I will do it if that what makes me feel good" basically, your generic atheistic mindset where everything that feels good is good and that which doesn't feel good is bad.

Ototsu_Yume

I much prefer singularity, this novels premise is great but adding such a disgusting character as the MC with outer gods attached to his cheat ends up tainting everything he does for me.

Leostargate04

I prefer singularity

xPYROTECHx

I still much prefer singularity.

Yomax Aioria

I think it would be 3 for singularity and 2 for this one, the 2 stories have great potential


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