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Remiel's Fall From Grace - Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2020-12-30 05:24:13 +0000 UTC

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Zmeydros

I didn't want Josiah to be a monolithic EEEEVVVILLLL character. I wanted to show there's a reason why he is in a position of leadership. He is blinded by his extreme religious views and tendency to make snap judgements, but he does think for himself and can be swayed by logic and facts.

Zmeydros

Loved your comment! The description of the sexy stuff between Ramda and Remiel was especially enjoyable. All described with such flair! I think you'll be quite pleased with the ending. I've written all the way to the end now. Last two parts are in beta reading. ^_^

Zmeydros

I won't spoil anything, but I think you'll be quite pleased with what happens. Glad you liked this chapter! I loved writing the parts with Cuber so much.

Reid

Daniel is the worst, I'm glad he's finally seeing some comeuppance! The moment Josiah said he called Ramda I thought "HA! Remiel's gonna be fine 😄", though I was surprised how much patience Josiah was giving Cuber, I didn't peg him for a rational type. Great chapter 👍

talk show ghost

Go Cuber! If Daniel had managed to fuck over Remiel again, especially when he was in the middle of trying to help his dumb ass, I don’t know if my heart could have taken it. There are few things sweeter than vindication, especially when it involves getting an authority figure to finally see truth. I’m terrified of the ending to this series though. Ramda has helped Remiel so much already but he still needs a lot of work to escape his upbringing like she did. As much as I want to believe in him, there’s no way in heck he is ready to do it all alone. I don’t know how, but I really hope Ramda figured out a way to allow him to stay on the ship with her and travel the stars with his lips wrapped around her pointed canine cock, with one hand squeezing the back of her knot and the other buried elbow deep in her fat juicy spade. I know it’s a long shot, but as a fellow canine herm I can’t help but love her too and want to see them both happy. A sad ending would break my heart T_T

Arkona Kothe

JUSTICE! Why do I feel Daniel is still going to go out of his way to make Remiel's life Hell?

Zmeydros

Hehe! I found it very interesting to write a character that couldn't actually speak and am quite happy with how that turned out.

Todasul .

Yeeessss!! Vindication!! your spoiling us rotten now Zmeydros ;P


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