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Remiel's Fall from Grace - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2020-06-19 19:23:49 +0000 UTC

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Zmeydros

Hoping to write more yet this month. ^_^

Arkona Kothe

This is shaping up to be an excellent series! I can't wait to see more!

Zmeydros

I am learning things about dialogue by writing Ramda's character. I'm trying to have her do things like show her fangs, but in ways that no one can pin down as an insult. Muahahaha!

Reid

Amazing chapter! I love the attention to detail on all the sci-fi tech, I am a sucker for that sort of stuff! I love that Captain Ramda gave an oh so subtle slap to Josiah's face when referring to the intelligence of the three going to Earth, *chef's kiss*. It just makes me love Captain Ramda so much more. The conclusion to this chapter was great, you know Ramda was 100% aware that Remiel was hiding his boner the WHOLE time haha XD. Awesome work as always <3


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