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Serving Your Herm Wolftaur Queen

🕑 Added 2020-04-05 15:10:39 +0000 UTC

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Zmeydros

Haha! Second person is like writing while staring at a fun house mirror. Like, lots of basic writing stuff that I know is important has to be implemented a bit differently. If I over-characterize the MC, readers will think, "That's not me," and experience less immersion. Instead, I have to take that characterization I would have done to the MC and apply it to the world and other characters. There's lots of other odd things about it too. Dialogue gets very strange, for instance, but it still works as long as you don't put words in the reader's mouth. Anticipating what questions or thoughts the reader has is essential.

FlamingFurry

WOW that was a ride. Point of view writing can't be easy; and this was spectacular! I've gotta take some notes.

Zmeydros

I was surprised how this story came together. The worldbuilding just kinda happened off the top of my head. XD

Arkona Kothe

You have a wonderful mastery of being able to tell us a story while all this beautiful smut is going on! Amazing story!


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