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Draft - Marie's Birthday Transformamtion
🕑 Added 2019-06-27 01:16:41 +0000 UTCAnother draft for "Clairvoyant Chinchilla's" and above! Enjoy!
Ezzie's been asked to help give Marie the best birthday gift ever. Marie's always wanted to be an anthro donkey herm and today's the day she gets her wish. What she's not expecting is to also have her multibreast fetish satisfied as well. Ezzie's in for a surprise as well because Marie enjoys her transformation almost too much.
###These mark places with recent edits##my notes about an edit, if I have any, go here.##
Marie's Birthday Transformation
by Zmeydros and JourneymanIK (Journeymanic)
Spring had a white-knuckled grasp on the land. A sixty-degree day smack dab in the middle of June was not entirely unheard of, but unexpected nonetheless. ###The cool weather had given me the opportunity to try out an outfit that made me unreasonably happy: dark brown slacks to cover my equine pussy and package, a maroon vest and a white button-down shirt to cover my full green-scaled bosom. The shirt had ruffles on just about every seam making the whole outfit look steampunk classy. Tom was going to love the way this mostly masculine attire clung to my feminine curves, but I wouldn't be wearing it for long, not with the plans we had in store.##
His home had ###rose-colored##would "rose" work?## siding and dark brown trim. The frosted glass oval in his wooden front door had wide beveling that twinkled as I walked up to it and knocked. "Hello?"
Pulling the door open, Tom parted his walnut-colored beard with a big smile as he admired my attire. "Hi, Ez!" He hugged me.
###Tom was charming and cuddly and ridiculously attracted herms with equine traits, which was a big part of why we started hanging out. It seemed like the few weeks we'd known each other were actually years.##
"What's your girlfriend's name again? Sorry, when you introduced us there was a bit too much going on." I gave him a squeeze before following him into his living room which was a flurry of greens and deep wood tones: like a forest reassembled into a living space.
"Marie. Red hair. Pretty as sin. Southern Belle accent." He guided me to sit down on his paisley-patterned green-on-darker-green couch. It was practically camouflage for my green-on-darker-green spotted scales. On the end table next to him was a basket filled with flower petals, chocolates, and lots of ribbon.
"Ahh, now I remember!" ###I looped my six-foot-long dragon tail around his waist and left the end of it lying in his lap. He was a tail-hug aficionado and I loved scratching that itch.## "Well, how is this going to go down? Did you decide we were going to pretend it was you bringing me in as a third party to spice up your sex lives or did you want me to spring it on her while we're trying to have a chat in the living room? I remember you being a bit torn about which one to pick."
Idly caressing my tail, he said.## "After two weeks of listening to her rant about how 'smokin' hot' you were, I've decided to go with the first option. I never told her what you can do, soooooo, that's going to be a nice surprise for her."
"Oooh!" I shivered a bit just thinking about what we were about to do. "Where is she? I'm ready to start when you are."
He checked his phone. "She left work fifteen minutes ago, so she should be home within ten minutes or so."
"So, do you want her to walk in on us doing naughty stuff on the couch? Do you want to have me pose like an erotic model so she's looking at my equine features the moment she comes in? Or do you want to do it softer where she chats with me first?" There was now a small tent in my slacks.
###"I've actually got a better idea!" he said pulling a spool of ribbon out of the basket. The purple of the ribbon matched my eyes perfectly. "Would you mind stripping?"##
I scoffed. "Would I mind stripping? I go around nude on my world all the time and I'm well known for testing societal norms even there." ###I unbuttoned my vest as I stood up and released him from my tail.## "I don't need the protection clothing offers, so why hide this body?" ###After unbuttoning the frilly shirt and removing my bra to expose my heavy-but-pert breasts, I undid the brass snaps above my enormous tail and slid my slacks down over my voluptuous hips and thighs.
He chuckled. "Good question!" he replied, his eyes drifting over every one of my assets.##
Once I was out of my clothes, he wound ribbon up my legs, across my belly, over my breasts, down my arms, and then affixed bows to my wrists, ankles, belly, and a big one on my half-hard cock. "Voila!"
Not getting fully erect was a challenge. I wanted Marie to be able to watch my titanic prick reach full hardness. Controlling my breathing and keeping up the chatter with Tom would likely do the trick, though. "Ooh, I'm quite the present, aren't I?"
"Yup! Especially if you would go lounge on the bed," He pointed to the bedroom door.
Excitedly hooking arms with him and dashing into the bedroom, I said, "What pose do you think would make her moan the moment she saw me?"
"Relaxed with a 'come hither' would probably be the best." He went over to the front of the bed and clamped his smartphone to a tripod. "Question: You okay with this being filmed?"
"I'd be doing it on stage if you set that up. Project it on the side of a building for all I care. I'd jill myself just thinking about everyone seeing it." I laughed. Climbing onto the bed, I lay back and spread my legs a bit with my tail running down the bed and over the edge. When Marie climbed up, she'd be straddling my tail while she went up to my pussy. I tilted my head a bit to look aloof and gave Tom my best, most seductive "come hither."
"Perfect!" He smiled. "I'll be right back. Unfortunately, I have a some final preparations to attend to." He sprinted out of the room. I heard him bumping into furniture, so I got off the bed to spy him throwing flower petals on the floor in a trail that led to the bedroom. Then he put the chocolate on the mantle in full view so it would be the first thing Marie would see when she came in. "There's a note on it telling her where her other present is," he explained.
"Is it all romantic and in nice calligraphy?" I asked knowing his style.
"No, I went with comic sans," he said with a straight face.
"Oh dear, she'll think she's about to be kidnapped."
He laughed. "Kidding, kidding. I had my grandmother write some nice calligraphy."
I raised an eyebrow. "I hope you didn't have her write anything too racy."
"Nah, it just tells her to follow the flower petals." His eyes dipped to my equine length. "You're going to pop the bow right off."
"True, I'm gonna stop distracting you and calm down," I said before going back to the bed. Sexual expectation always did such terrible, wonderful things to me. The tension of the ribbon around my prick receded as I kept my hands awkwardly at my sides and denied myself my own touch. Managing a state between soft and erect was a titillating challenge.
The moment Tom was back in the bedroom, he stripped to nothing and finished getting his smartphone ready to record. "She should be here any second," he said as he reclined comfortably next to me. ###The bit of extra weight around his belly tempted me to pull him against me while his narrow hips and legs made me want to use him as a lawn dart. His features were a frustrating tangle of attractive and adorable.## He danced his fingers across my belly getting torturously close to my sensitive bits, but never actually touching them.
###I gave him looks whenever he got close to my erogenous zones, ready to bap him if he teased me too much.## When his right index finger circled my nipples like an ice skater, I swatted his nose.
Laughing, he pulled his hand back just in time for us to hear the front door open.
Marie's silky voice called out, "Tom?"
The two of us remained silent as she shut the door and made the shoe rack jangle by stowing her shoes. Several seconds later, I heard her set down her bag and tear open the envelope Tom had left. "I'll be right there! Just gotta drop something off in the fridge."
The foil wrapper of a chocolate crinkled as she opened it and then there was a crunch as she bit down on the Ferrero Rocher contained within. I knew that sound well because they were one of the few sweets that I sometimes found myself drawn to. Soon after, there was that sucking sound that came with opening a fridge.
Mere seconds from being seen, my cock swelled in anticipation straining the ribbons encasing it. I loved how impatient my body was, knowing I was constantly at the edge of decency was quite a thrill.
Tom reached over and tapped the remote on the nightstand filling the room with Elton John's wonderful voice and energetic melodies. Marie had been raving about the new Elton John movie at the party and it was adorable how much of a fan girl she was.
Sure enough, Marie entered while dancing to the beat, not looking directly at us at first because she was likely trying to put on a happy little show for Tom. Her medium-blue faded jeans clung to her legs and her simple short-sleeved V-neck provided a window to her modest-but-pert cleavage. After she did a little turn where she slid on her socks to face the bed, she froze. It took her two blinks to decide I wasn't a figment of her imagination. "Oh my GAAAWWD!? Ezzie? EZZIE! Tom , you got me Ezzie for my birthday?"
I gave a casual wave. "Hey there, sexy!"
Her knees got weak as her eyes darted across my body. My thick hips and thighs, my bountiful breasts, my half-hard shaft, and my tail all got some attention. But where her eyes settled was on my massive balls. When I lifted them so she could stare at my equine snatch, she moaned and put her hand on the wicker dresser next to her to steady herself.
"Happy Birthday," Tom chuckled. "Do you like your gift?"
Marie nodded so exuberantly that she looked like a cartoon character. "Love it!" Her face went from awe, to lust as she cautiously approached the bed. Straddling my tail, she said, "My Lord, Ezzie, you're the hottest thing I've ever seen."
I lifted my tail to her crotch and applied some pressure along with magic to begin her transformation. "What are you going to do about it?"
Marie gasped and blushed as I felt a damp heat build between her legs.
Tom said, "You know I can't even be mad at the statement. I know she's hotter than me."
If Marie had spoken I imagine she would have emitted a dial tone. Her mind had left the building. All she could do was grind against my tail while she squeezed at it with her hands.
Not to be outdone. Tom reached across my chest and pinched my left nipple, my other nipple pressing up into his arm as he did so. This got a moan from me while my tail twitched between Marie's legs. Her clit would soon be large enough for me to feel through the fabric.
Marie lost her balance from the sudden shot of pleasure and face planted on my balls and the base of my cock. Then, she took a deep breath of my scent before licking at my prick. Her hands worked at a desperate pace to remove the ribbon so she could play with more of it. Meanwhile, I focused on filling in her new equine clit and soon there was an obvious throbbing rise in her crotch.
Released from the ribbon, I swelled to full hardness. Marie only got more fervent as she worked her way up to my broad equine head, ###exploring with her mouth and hands.##
Tom kissed and nibbled at my right ear, paying special attention to the pointy tip. "Turning up the pheromones are we?"
"N-no! She's actually that into me." I was both fascinated and impressed.
Marie made me gasp when she licked up my pre, she then nibbled at the beaded texture at the edge of my flare while feeling under my balls. When she found my pussy, she crooned, "HNNNG! FuuuUCK!"
"I might become the side dude!" Tom half-joked.
"Nah, you're the one that set this all up," I said.
Marie sat up, fingers still exploring my entrance. "Tom , I still can't believe this. Tell me right now, is Ezzie really here?"
###Tom gave the end of my cock a squeeze.
I gasped and clenched my fists at the intense sensation.
"Seems like it to me," he replied.##does the separation of actions read well here?##
As he toyed with the head of my prick, pre leaked down the back of his hand. Then he took his drenched hand and held it out to Marie. "What's the verdict? Sweet or tart?"
Self conscious now that she'd been put on the spot, Marie daintily licked at his hand. "Both, it tastes a bit grassy, maybe some lavender? Sweeter than any I've tasted, too."
"I find it helps with the bitterness," I said.
"You edited everything, didn't you?" Marie smiled.
I nodded.
"Only the most exotic babes for my babe," Tom said.
Marie rolled her eyes at Tom's corniness.
I grabbed Marie's blouse and started unbuttoning it saying, "You're overdressed, my dear."
With a twinkle in her eye, Marie pushed her chest forward and posed like an aristocrat being tended to by her servants. "Yes, undress me, slave!"
It was Tom's turn to roll his eyes. "Marie, if I know anything about Ezzie, I think you have the roles reversed."
"Oh, she'll know her place soon enough," I reassured him while working Marie's blouse and bra off. When her tits fell free, ###I kneaded them## while pressing my tail up against her still-clothed cooch. Adding more magic, I pushing her transformation forward. Her pussy lips were changing shape, getting more puffy and stretchy. It was now easier to dig into the crotch of her pants.
She bucked her hips and squeaked as I changed her, unaware of why she felt so amazing down there.
Tom sat up. "Let's give her a bit of a show." I felt his cock brush against my cheek.
I wrapped my whole tongue around his cock squeezing it nice and hard as I unbuttoned and unzipped Marie's jeans.
"Oh fuck yes!" he exclaimed.
While still squeezing Tom's shaft with my tongue just to make him squirm, I pulled down Marie’s panties and ran a finger over her still-widening clit.###Should I connect the following paragraph to this one?.##
Marie squealed as her hips quaked. "Why's my clit feel so heckin' GOOD!?"
Thrusting his dick into my maw, Tom asked, "Gah! When was the last time you were this turned on, Love?"
"I've never felt anythin' like this down there! AAAHHHNNN!" Marie cried as her snatch started to darken and her labia continued to thicken.
I helped her out of her pants and panties and then let Tom's length fall from my mouth so I could say, "Let's switch places, Marie."
"Me on my back?" She asked.###and I nodded.##does that work or should the nod be on a separate line?##
I nodded.
"Sure!" She moved to the side and I moved out from under her then she lay next to her boyfriend and gave him a kiss. "Best birthday present, ever!"
He kissed her back passionately. "You know it."
###After their kiss, she stared at my equine endowment## like she was trying to do the math of whether it would fit.
###Rubbing at her pussy, I savored the sensation of it becoming even more voluptuous as it started taking on an equine teardrop shape.##
Propping herself up on her elbows, she asked, "What's goin' on? Did you do somethin' ###to maAAAHHH! YES!"##
She never got to finish her sentence because I nuzzled her clit and drove my long forked tongue into her. ###I wasn't subtle, I used her wetness to abuse her shifting passage so thoroughly my own sex got wet out of envy.## I pointed at Tom with my tail and then at my snatch, a non-verbal suggestion that he make himself useful.
Giving me a salute, he slipped behind me and buried his face in my cunt.
###I licked deep and interspersed suckling of her clit to encourage it to grow bigger.
And it did. It *so* did. ###is the marking of the intonation worth having asterisks since italics isn't a thing in .txt? And I spaced things out here to see if you like it this way.##
When it was ###larger than the end of my pinky finger, Marie came.## At first, she squeaked, but then she nearly roared. Her whole body worked to rub her pussy against my face. Her pussy had dark smooth and leathery lips and her tailhole was now that wonderful equine donut shape. Her long donkey tail had only just started, but I'd have it long enough to pop out from between her ass cheeks very soon.
I didn't let up, and moaned right into her muff as Tom devoured my pulsing sex. When I coiled my tongue inside her, she hollered loud enough to make a porn star blush.
Fur filled in on her inner thighs as her ears pointed. Her nose had flattened a bit and her middle toe was much bigger than it used to be. I distracted her from all this by running my hands over her belly as four new nipples sprouted on it. Donkeys didn't normally have multiple breasts, but both Tom and Marie had a huge kink for it and I was happy to oblige.
###Tom replaced his face with his fist to keep my pussy company while he marveled at Marie's changes.##
Receiving his fist was no challenge for my pussy and once he had it in, I was gasping and gyrating and squeezing at his knuckles. Fists always made me feel so nice and full.
###Craning her head to look down at her belly and chest, she saw her new nipples and swiftly widening patches of white donkey fur. "Wh-what? I'm getting more tits?"
Instead of answering her, I started teasing her new nipples with my mouth and tongue, smearing her own mare juices across her belly and bosom.## Her legs shook as she groaned in pleasure. Her other toes shrank as her middle toe looked more and more like a hoof.
Pressing his fist deeper inside me, he teased Marie. "Mosquitoes are bad this time of year. You should get those welts on your belly looked at."
Grey fur spread across her legs and up her thighs as her ankles cracked. She rubbed at her face as her nose flattened further and her jaws pressed forward. ###"Oh Gawd! I'm growin' a muzzle!" Her lips were parted and her wide eyes were full of elation.##is the elation sentence redundant with the one that follows it?## She looked like someone who'd just seen a chest-high pile of presents on Christmas morning.
###With her attention diverted, I tweaked her nipples just below what would have been painful.##
She howled in pleasure as her ears lengthened and her whole head got peppered with fur. When the area above her mare cunny began to swell, I clenched around Tom's fist and dragged him with me as I straddled her crotch.
###He yelped in shock before paying me back by wiggling his fist inside me.
Writhing atop her, I stroked my hands over her growing breasts. ##
Marie's stallion equipment was on its way and I needed to move to the next part of my plan, so I waited until he let up a bit and said, "Okay, time for you to play with Marie's snatch instead." I relaxed and then moaned as he worked his fist free.
Now that Tom had his hand back, he moved it to the rise that was forming in Marie's crotch. "Feeling okay hon? Didn't eat anything you're allergic too did you?"
"A-allergy? What?" Her eyes went wide. "I-I sound so different with a muzzle."
"Let's try out that muzzle."### I leaned in and kissed her deeply as her breasts swelled bigger between us. Touching my nipples to her uppermost set of breasts, I ground into her lap. I felt Tom shifting behind me and then heard a slurping sound as he slipped his fingers into her sopping snatch.##
She moaned into the kiss pressing up against me as that sac above her cunt got bigger. I flooded her body with magic adding to the pleasure she was already receiving. Concentrating, I duplicated her ovaries and converted the duplicates into testes. Then I set them on their way toward her growing sac as I moved her urethra to her clit and then moved that soon-to-be phallus up toward her sac.
Tom leaned forward and reached under my tail and into where our crotches met, so he could tease the swelling nub. "Hon, you know, sometimes the pesto gets to you?"
In amongst her moans, I heard a telltale groan of mild annoyance. Her six breasts were really coming along, each pair a bit diminished in size to give her a beautiful aesthetic. ###It's how I liked to have my own when I played around with multiple sets.##
I made a new clit to replace the one that was going to be her donkey cock. The moment that her phallus found its home above her sac, a sheath formed around it. I kissed that forming shaft with my pussy letting the end of it poke up into me. Then I rose a couple inches off it and drove myself down again. Each time I made her length disappear, it came back out longer and thicker.
She let out a series of sharp moans each louder than the last.
Her prick went from being as long as her pinky and as thick as her middle finger to being as thick as her thumb and longer than her middle finger. Fur was filling in on her sides as she came from the sensation of her testes dropping into their sac. The orgasm made her jam herself into me. Her prick didn't fire anything because her balls and prostate weren't complete yet.
###"Oh, Ezzie! I can't believe this! Your pussy is so hot! So wet! And--GAH!--You're squeezin' me so hard!" The awe on her gasping face was potent enough that she almost looked like she was orgasming the whole time I was adding length and girth.
"Just wait until you're at full size!" I taunted.
She looked at me like I'd gone mad. "You're giving me more?"
"A whole lot more, sugar." I kissed the surprise from her lips as I reveled in her excitement.##
Her prick was plenty big enough to stir up my passage and I was panting while I fucked the space between her breasts with my cock. I stretched wider and wider for her shaft ###adoring## the sensation of it enlarging inside me. Her medial ring was now riding against that special spot inside me and her flare felt oh so nice in my depths.
###It was time give her more freedom to fuck me, so I rose off of her, saying, "Let's do this equine style."##
Tom pulled his fist out of Marie so she could roll out of the way. As she did so, her prick, now easily eight inches long, thumped against the bed. When I got on all fours, she said, "This is the best...I don't even have words."
"Then don't use any, just stick your present inside me and express yourself through the art of thrusting." I lifted my tail and offered my sopping depths to her.
###"Unnggh! That pose! I'm gonna get a nosebleed," Tom cooed.##
I pressed my front against the bed and looked back pointing my ass upwards. "Come on, give me a pony ride."
"I'm not a pony!" She got behind me and put the head of her donkey dick at my entrance. ###"I'm a fuckin' stallion!" she roared, shoving her flare into me.##
The amount of leverage she had in this position was so much higher than when I was on top of her. Her hands went to my hips, she leaned forward, and her blunt cock head burrowed into my muff. I groaned into the sheets and pressed back against her.
Tom dashed off to grab a bottle of lube and when he came back to the bed, he lubed himself up and Marie before grabbing the base of her long donkey tail. "Let's see how sensitive your new prostate is."
He must have shoved himself in right then, because Marie's eyes nearly went different directions as she froze to cry out in passion. Her shaft throbbed in me and I thought she was going to get off, but she gritted her teeth and started thrusting instead. Her nostrils flared as she unloaded physical effort on me. I yowled pressing my head against the bed as I took handfuls of the sheets.
Her prick and her balls grew nicely as I moaned louder and louder. The squelching sounds of me taking in her new package were gonna make people turn down the volume when they watched our video. Her balls were so heavy they were thwacking the backs of my thighs. Her medial ring was popping in and out of me. I could feel her flare getting pushed and pulled by my passage.
"Tom, give her balls some love, I want her to feel just how big I'm making them." I looked into her eyes, "Soon, you'll be as big as me!"
###She arched her back and moaned. "OH YES! Give me a stallion prick and huge balls like yours, Ezzie! I can't get enough of this!"##
Tom mercilessly railed her tailhole making sure the first time she came with her new equipment, it would be earth-shattering. I felt his hand come between my thighs and her balls so he could fondle her heavy orbs. As he did this, he metered out his words between pants, "Hon, I'm recording all this and I want to hear you scream. I want you to scream so loud we get noise complaints. I want someone to call the police thinking someone was murdered. Thinking that a cat and dog are trying to make a family together! I want saucy sexual pandemonium!"
This got Marie to let out her first whinny. As she fucked me so hard the bed complained, she growled out, "Having a horsecock is fuckin' amazing! Your cunt is a perfect fit! I love this!" After a couple more moans, she aded, "I'm gonna cum so hard! Fuck my donut harder, hon! I can take it!"
I put my tail around Tom to give him something to push off of, and he was soon jackhammering her so hard he was going to have bruises on his hips.
She thrived on his rough treatment. I pushed back against it all letting her fuck me so viciously our bodies clapped against each other. She was testing the limits of my mare cunt.
Her prick, reaching just short of my size, flared as she rammed into me hard enough the headboard put a hole in the wall. Then she whinnied like a horse trying to get the attention of the entire herd. So much cum flooded into me that I felt her cream gush back out and travel down my balls. I came, having held on too long already. My pussy milked her so hard that she writhed as she kept filling me.
Then Tom hit his peak and slammed into her tailhole before grunting and hollering. As he lost his load inside her, she whinnied a second time. While I wondered if people were going to call animal control on us, she fired more shots inside me making me feel exceptionally full and satisfied.
None of us spoke until a few minutes later when she said, "That was the gosh darn best thing I've ever done."
"Happy birthday," I said.
"Darlin', you don't get to say that until you've returned the favor." She reached around and tugged at my cock, all her shyness forgotten. By giving her a cock, had I created a monster? If so, she was my kind of monster.
I shivered under her, harder than ever. "Yes, ma'am."
