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Miss November 2016 - WiP03

🕑 Added 2016-11-28 20:08:21 +0000 UTC

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Thanks! I should make a little second Tumblr for the SFW stuff, so people don't accidentally stumble on porn when following the URL in the watermark :X

LucchiniSW

I've noticed you haven't had a huge amount of work up on your Tumblr but one thing your work deffinetley doesn't lack in is quality. Proper impressed. Take my monies and keep making awesome stuff! Love the SFW backrounds you do too. I can show off your work without being judged xD

That's intentional, actually. I wanted the hair to kinda match the flow of her body. I've tried making it fall more realistically, but thought it hurt the composition too much. The other option was to let it fall over her shoulder to the front, but that would hide most of it and since her hair is an important part of her silhouette, I wanted it to be very visible.

that's why i went for the change. still not very happy with it, so i think i'll play around with it some more

just piggybacking on their talent :X

yup, after this pic.

JarBeezy

Noice!!!!

Firts Lats

Daangg.........

Man, thx for exist!. This is art..

Well damn, and I thought the last one looked fantastic. This next step is in a league of it's own. Thanks for the update!

My one critique other than what you've already said you are still working on is that there doesn't feel like there is enough gravity on her hair towards the middle end of her ponytail. Seems to me like the tail should drop down slightly steeper from the apex and have a little bit of a U before it wraps back over the back of her leg.

I (personally) liked the expression in the previous image better but this one is definitely more her character.