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Caught in Her Web - Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2023-10-27 06:24:55 +0000 UTC

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Puerko_Sempai

When will you publish it?

Puerko_Sempai

How do you imagine the videos in Gwen's gallery? https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1721741439988908471?s=19 https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1722187786131009612?s=19 https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1721590210658807997?s=19 https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1721536348346261626?s=19 https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1721040839382855700?s=19 https://twitter.com/HIRENX_/status/1721152885327851731?s=19 I think these videos are the best representation I can think of.

Puerko_Sempai

👍👍👍😊

hugplx

Pops up literally next chapter - though it's less of a focus and more of the side 'kink' of the chapter.

Puerko_Sempai

I hope you write scenes of Peter again watching videos from Gwen's gallery.

Puerko_Sempai

More chapters, please🤩🤩👍

Joseph

As I said, with 'new' things, there will be confirmations. In the instance of Gwen being with another guy, Pete will be the one to instigate, or encourage, for example. And I'm fine with any queries.

Sentinel1107

With taking what happened in Sweden in consideration you are ofc right. A lot of that kind of talk would take out a lot of steam from a mostly smut story like this. I also now kinda remember that you once said to look at it like a diary chapter from their lives. So a lot happens off camera and is never really discussed. Hope my comment didn't come over as some harsh criticsm. I still like the story. Just something I noticed when I overthought the chapter too much.

Joseph

There are certain discussions you need to assume happen off camera. I opened the door for Gwen being fine with Pete 'cheating' back on their trip to Sweden. Likewise with Gwen and other women. It's happened before. Assume they had the conversation. I put this in a similar category as contraception and stds. Things that should absolutely be a consideration in real life but detract from a smut story. Gwen wasn't doing anything behind Pete's back either, there are cameras and drones everywhere, the separation was for Cindy's benefit. If Cindy was a guy, it would absolutely be different. They haven't crossed that line as a couple, yet.

Sentinel1107

I reread the chapter several times, the chapter in itself is great and the smut is hot but there always was something that irked me. In the last few chapters we see them teasing each other to cheat. This teasing & pushing of cheating without real communication leads in my opinion to the bad stuff. Maybe I missed it, but I don't remember that they openly talked about them being ok with the other one cheating. I know Pete in his mind is fine with it. Especially in this chapter where Gwen hoped Peter cheated on her and catching him in the act without a real discussion. Teasing/Dirty talk is one thing but getting real disappointed at Pete, because he didn't do it is weird. And then right after, having sex with Cindy without talking to Peter. Don't know why in cheating lesbian sex is seen somehow not as bad as sex between a man & a woman. Because that is what Gwen did in my opinion, she cheated. Even if Pete finds it hot and in the end Gwen uses it to turn Peter on. If there is no or not enough communication in an open relationship, cheating is still possible. I'm against cheating, but consensual cheating where everyone is on the same level is fine. Long story short. I think this chapter really put its toe on the line to the bad stuff for me and Pete & Gwen should have that talk soon.

Joseph

I'm thinking of having him ask Jean for help when he goes to see the prof (not reading to bother X with it)

O G

Great chapter as always. Excited to see where this goes. Curious, will Peter be working on that anti telepath thing? Idk if it was just a off hand remark but I do want to see that scene where Emma can't read his mind lol


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