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Newlife 0.6.8

🕑 Added 2020-10-21 21:47:28 +0000 UTC

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Saur

Typo: "Agree" to prostitution request *** You know that a good proper girl wouldn't prostitute herself to someone who solicited her randomly on the street. Nevertheless you decided to do exactly that and tell him that it depends on what he wants you to do. *** There should be a comma between “good” and “proper girl,” and another after "nevertheless."

Saur

Suggestion: Allow the Office Boss and the Sleazy Business Associate (Sales Route) to request the PC's number? *** Even with just simple "ask" scenes tagged on to existing ones, adding some way for these two NPCs to request the PC's number would network them into the existing relationship content. Since the Business Associate is implied to be married, he could just use the Sales_Boss variant relationship scenes.

Saur

Suggestion: "The baby is his" serious conversation variant for birthed child *** Thanks to the various pregnancy acceleration means in the game, it's very possible for the PC to give birth to her partner's child without ever telling him while she was pregnant. Can there be a dialogue variant to tell a male NPC that he is the father of the PC's already-born infant?

Saur

Typo: Beg to be released *** Annoyed at his refusal to let you go, you bark an order at him. He pays you no attention, except perhaps to drive his disobedient cock even deeper into your unaroused pussy. *** Double-space between "unaroused' and "pussy."

Saur

Typo: Sofa sex (no pull out) *** With a last, deep grunt, Winslowdrives his cock balls-deep into you, so you can feel his swollen orbs nestling against your labia. Without even the slightest attempt to keep his promise to pull out, he starts to orgasm, his erection throbbing in your pussy as he ejaculates deep inside. *** Needs a space between "npcName" and "drives" in the first sentence.

Saur

Typo: Inept Lover fondles poorly (Sofa scene) *** Winslow awkwardly tries to reach under you to touch your breasts butfails to get his fingers between them and the sofa and instead accidentally gives you a painful poke on the side of your tit. *** Needs a space in "butfails" to become "but fails."

Saint Destiny

Seducing office co-worker scene: "As you do so, it suddenly occurs to you that this is technically your Alan's first kiss. " There's something wrong with this sentence. Should it say 'your and Alan's first kiss'?

Saint Destiny

"A few hours pass, and you're working away, engrossed in a spreadsheet, when Alanpasses by your desk." 'Allan pases' needs a space.

Saur

Saur's Megathread Last Updated: 12/1/2020 Suggestion: Milky variant text during marriage consummation ***** A firm tug on your shoulders gets you to lift your upper body from the altar. Rocky slips his powerful hands beneath to cup your breasts. He eagerly kneads the lush naked flesh, your massive tits engulfing his hands in warm softness. ***** Could there be variant text here if the PC is lactating?

Splendid Ostrich

Glad you're enjoying it! I'm sure there must have been discussions in the past about Ivy's reactions, though without trawling through some forums I'm not sure where they'd be. I could put a list up, but why not ask on the discord first - that way if someone's spent time tracking them down they'll have a chance to show off their knowledge to you!

Splendid Ostrich

Thanks! I'll get that fixed

Saint Destiny

"You slip into Danny's office, take the seat in front of his desk and seductively cross your legs, giving him a good look at your palecalves. With his eyes on your body, you flirt with him, using your feminine wiles to convince him to do his job. Your persuasions certainly have an effect. Danny is convinced, but not that he wants to sit down and do some paperwork. Rather, he's convinced that he wants you to get him off. He makes you an offer: if you make him feel good, then he'll do his job properly today. " 'pale calves' need a space.

BRobort

Is there a list anywhere of the names Ivy reacts to? I've already found a couple. Love the new rival and her events, by the way. :)

Splendid Ostrich

Ah, the shy trait doesn't actually have a specific associated rival type. If a character's only trait is Shy then they'll get the "office bully", who's the rival that appears if none of the others is available.

RevolverJ

Interested in what the reason will be for the rival disliking the PC if they have the shy archetype.

Dunan Rayne

Finally! bald guy appears!

keenam

Thank you very much!

Splendid Ostrich

I'd want a proper lesbian sex scene first, but perhaps as part of the lesbian update, should it win the next vote. One of the things I'll be doing for that is looking over existing npcs and quasi-npcs to see if they should get updates and I'll certainly look over the rival again then.

Splendid Ostrich

Happy birthday, have a great day!

keenam

I agree with Axel's question and too wonder, other than that this is great timing for a update as it is my birthday today!

Axel

So will you be adding a hatesex/falling-in-love-with-rival path?


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