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Chapter 60 - Two Days Later (Epilogue)

🕑 Added 2023-08-24 20:16:05 +0000 UTC

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Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Hmm... that's a nice idea. I had been toying with 'the divine circle-jerk' but that might be too raunchy...

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Minor spoiler, I guess, but technically... Xyn is at the exact same Power level stat-wise as Donum, with a focus on Strength and Charisma. However, her 'mundane' skills, like sword mastery and etc, particularly when it relates to combat, are well into the grandmastery range.

Ryan

Really fantastic chapter. Loved Donum interacting with random villagers. Super loved Donum and Xhinn finally burying the hatchet. Going to be weird moving forward with a lilim that's presumably stronger than any of his others are going to get in the next 50 layers though. Jax is going to pass the boundary finally, super happy for her. Called it with the Watcher's Mark making Donum smell good to the goddesses, have zero idea what's going on with his own nature stuff. Also you've done a good job with Donum getting better at communicating as his stats/experience increase. He was a badass at points in this chapter and it feels earned, good to see. shuttered to a halt -> shuddered Did you forgot -> forget my loin -> loins With ever passing -> every

well, this was great, i absolutely enjoyed it. as for book title, one that comes to mind if you were intending to keep a theme with the titleing could be 'to serve the god(es)s' since the first book is 'to lead the lilim'(or some variant of 'To [verb] the [supernatural entity]'). though that might be a bit tongue in cheek, but i do think its fitting with the book theme since the major driving forces in the book really are the goddesses. though we havent seen the justice and mercy one yet, looking forward to that one, but hey 3/5 is pretty good.