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Chapter 42.2

🕑 Added 2023-02-20 06:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Nathaniel Bartley Logee

It's Donum's accounting of A&J's views as he understands them. Sorry. This will probably get a revisit once the editing phase comes around.

SirPavlova

Eh, I’m with Mia. Wasting their points to make her point was quite an overreaction, sure, but that was a real dick move from Arx.

SirPavlova

It’s really hard to tell whether the second paragraph is Donum’s own view or Donum’s accounting of Arx & Jax’s views. All the surrounding context says it’s the latter, but the paragraph itself seems very strongly the former.

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Thanks for the reminder. I'll correct that. I had forgotten that was what I'd called that. Yes, that is correct. However, it was intentionally left a little broader than just 'lilim.'

Ryan

"This spell does not confer Lesser Immortality" Should be 'Linked Revival' right? Otherwise it seems like a non sequitur. Also that final paragraph is a bit confusing, does it mean that if one of his Lilim is dead he can revive them by sacrificing a willing or defeated entity instead of almost killing himself?

Ellimanist15

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Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Sorry, I was replying to deadeye. I wouldn't want to make something dumb and unbelievable.

White Neko Knight

Yup. That's how much of a betrayal what she did was. And I'd be surprised if he did know a way. Honestly meditation and mindfulness seem like key skills he needs to work on.

Ellimanist15

Oh I thought that's what you were going for.

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

She would die if he did. Not that he knows of any way of pulling something like that off.

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Hopefully this was not one of those?

deadeyemax

I’ve seen them, but usually they are pretty dumb and not at all… I’m not sure what word to choose. Believable? In any case, Might be why a lot of authors avoid them.

White Neko Knight

I'd honestly be pissed as well. To the point I'd debate upon purging her.

Ellimanist15

I don't think I've ever seen a major cat fight in the harem books I've read.


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