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Monarch Chapter 73

🕑 Added 2026-01-10 03:28:26 +0000 UTC

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Andrew Lechner

He likely won't. His quest is become to a squad leader (basically the first commissioned officer rank), then continue climbing the military hierarchy until gathers enough power and influence to overthrow the king. Going off to join the King's secret police/special forces would too off that path, especially when are they are who killed his family.

Lapis Lazuli

Alrighty then… I am coming from RR. I decided around chapter 24 over there to read 50 chapters ahead and I am glad I did. This is a nice piece of literature you have here but the characterization of your MC and just the voice of this work is something you can work on a little bit more. It’s not god awful but I, personally, have zero attachment to the MC. He doesn’t have anything that makes me want to think about him, root for him or go to war for him. He’s not funny. Or witty. Or smart or above average in power. He’s just meh as a -person-. The only things that stood out about him for me is he’s loyal and emotionally motivated; to the point of recklessness. Also, this is an Isekai/LitRPG and the powers/abilities of the characters have been lukewarm. Even the mage character, Casper, has been boring in that regards. As a whole, this is readable. No one can say that it’s trash. I certainly wouldn’t. But it’s missing a spark. And as an author, the only thing you can do is get better. It is my assumption that you will get better. I hope to see you develop and expand; you have a good base. TFTC.

C

Like you said, he has no choice in the matter.

Sly Bayesian Fox

At this point, keeping Varric in the team is a mistake; even if Serene threatened him to revoke his status as a Hand, Rayne cannot trust the dude not to provoke his death while in the dungeon. I guess the higher-ups can force the issue, regardless of logic, because Rayne is barely higher than a footsoldier. But surely there is a better option than keeping that powder keg there.

Johan

Tftc i realy hope he wont join them.

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter!

Devourerofwords

Or they are playing good cop bad cop

KipBR

Serene saw him holding back.


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