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Monarch Chapter 70

🕑 Added 2026-01-03 03:22:49 +0000 UTC

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Elijah

This was fantastic. And addressed a lot of the concerns I had with the power levels. Hopefully you have a chance to flesh it out a bit more but this was great. The fact Rayne felt he could take on the (younger) stonefur bear and when the elder came after him he knew he was a s cooked unless he was clever and FAST. This was brilliant. Rayne doesn't have to be unbeatable, that isnt the point I was hoping to make, it's about consistency. In all the stories if read and tried to write myself I've come to feel that consistency os the most important part of a story. Perfect consistency isn't possible but the general goal should be to keep inconsistencies to a minimum. And for me, this fight helped a lot with that. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. Blessings and hoping for a wonderful new year for you and yours. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination with us.

Extra27

I will try to do better! Thank you for reading.

Joshua

I question why she would out this information so publicly

DAGr

I have finally caught up, and just wanted to say I’m enjoying the book for the most part. I appreciate that his big attributes are being utilized now, but it still feels off. Was his body holding back this whole time? Do attributes only matter when you lock in? Idk, to be truthful the attributes feel hollow. The isekai/reincarnation aspect feels hollow, and I think Rayne himself feels hollow. The side characters have more personality than he does, and his previous life is hardly mentioned or utilized at all, so what is the point of it being part of the story, aside for using the tags to potentially target RR’s market? Just my two cents on how I think it can be improved going forward. I appreciate your work and I hope you continue going!

C

Thank you, sir, I will have another.

Extra27

I will correct it. Thank you.

Abartk

To be fair, we haven't seen how raid group fights effect XP calculations yet.

Dax

> Around them, a few soldiers had recovered enough to move around, counting the number of the dead, Bran and Quinn among them. Kind of reads like Bran and Quinn were among the dead, not among the soldiers counting them.

M.A.C.

Honestly, I would have preferred him to reach level 30 after this battle ( I find it strange that he didn't level up by killing a monster that was probably 20 or more levels higher than him).

Johan

Tftc

ReadingObsessed

Forsaken are convicts who chose military instead of hard time/ death.

Caiban

Wait but he is not a traitor? I thought his title as forsaken marks him as family of a traitor?

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter!


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