[New Comic] Witchy Ex-Girlfriend: Part Two

findesiecle

Loved it!

Kayla Kocklove

Exactly! Part of me would love to see her accepting her fate, and maybe having to get a job at a strip club, and he picks her up from working... tons of ideas

Larry Talbot

You could always have the kids off camera so to speak... if you went that far ahead for a coda or something.

Fox Face

Ditto!

Kayla Kocklove

I'm familiar with the story, I'd like to see at the end what happens a few years down the line! Has Corey accepted her fate?

Jhf

I just reread both chapters together, and yea… this is the apex, haha. As mentioned above I would love to see a few more chapters. Also would love to see an epilogue for Roommate From Hell. Would love to see where our friend from That Evil Bitch Christine wound up, too, heh.

Pete Parker

Fantastic! You never disappoint, Kara!

Fox Face

Ha, I guess you kind of are writing self-fanfiction! Still, I think it's worked very well. And again, it's hard to write characters who are awful jerks but still human, and thus sympathetic and capable of change. I think you've struck a good balance with Corey here - for instance, he does seem to genuinely care a lot for Dave. Just, aha, a lot more physically now than he is used to.

Steve

Wow...I wouldn't be disappointed with this going a few more rounds!

DJ

Incredible. Corey looks perfect. Love every sexy panel

Love this. So good.

Stormfries

Amazing kara amazing today looking

KaraComet

My style has changed a lot since I began writing in 2013. I've gained a lot more investment in my characters, especially since I see them visually now. Definitely changes how I see them. So I'm glad you feel it's translating well to a comic format. Because I'm basically writing fanfiction of my own stories from ages ago. Lol

Fox Face

I think this is your best work yet Kara. Love the expansions you've made from the story, and Cori's look is perfect. You've done a great job, I think, of making Corey a bad enough person that we can enjoy his fate, but not so bad that we don't sympathise with him a bit. Who knows? Perhaps his new life will make him a better person! Very keen to see the flash forward in the next part - also excited you feel there is more to explore here.

Jhf

I’d love to see another chapter ❤️

Larry Talbot

Looks like ol' Corry got a nose ring and navel piercing as punishment from buzzing her hair off, or Dave thinking about them as new little add-on's? Great addition to the story itself, and the new piercings too!