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🕑 Added 2022-05-13 20:43:58 +0000 UTCNot super satisfied with the visuals on this one-- text feels a little too small, composition isn't great, and the colors are all muddled. Doesn't *pop* like it should. Learning to work in a more visually dense style like this will necessitate some growing pains ( compared to say, bad enders, which was essentially all white and background-less). I will probably be trying out some different compositional techniques going forward. Expect my tree-drawing abilities to improve, too.
Comments
Martynas Klimas
Bullshit, the Calbain reveal facial expression is tops
Beany Tuesday
they are from the april comic, that was the first time they've appeared
petrichor
Insert slowpoke meme, but these are the characters from the April comic? Have they appeared before then? I feel like an unsupportive fan but my memory is shit
Emily Ree
I’m really excited for this one! Even if you arent happy with the visuals yet, I’m really invested in this story already!