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🕑 Added 2021-06-17 23:53:48 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
So, I'm not completely sold on the dialogue for this one yet
2 versions!
The original is the first one,
Not only It makes more sense that the guy doesn't know what the girls are talking about,
but it also gives it a more melancholic feeling, followed immediately by that chick talking about stuff that makes it all more chaotic :p
The second maybe its more clear...
but dunno... maybe I'll add it as complement(?)
This might be a rare case when I end changing all the dialogue over the weekend,
who knows :p
but the art its finished so I decided to share it anyway :3
PS: For a little more context, she's a body hopper :3
but she just swap with willing targets (she somehow can feel it)
so I guess she just got tired of the situation she was in :p
Somewhat based on Sam T's suggestion "All girl school"
(from first 3 word poll) but went on another direction :p
Hope you like it!
and let me know what you think :D
Comments
Sukiaida
Body swap, yup.
J DD
The guy is looking at the girl and being envious. The girl is a body Hopper that can only exchange with people that are willing and so switches with the guy when they make eye contact. The guy, now girl, is happy and fine because now their life won't likely end in suicide.
dragoncrescent
Ohhh, excellent body-swap! He wound up quite the hottie!! I kind of agree - the second version is a bit more immersive, as he wouldn't know what they were talking about beforehand. I understood what was going on immediately, but I can see how those without a specific interest in body-swap might not catch on right away.
Blue Dragon
The art is great, but I'm honestly not sure what is happening in this comic. Is the guy turning into the girl?
Kannel
xD
Kannel
yeah, it's kinda hard to follow :P I think i have an idea already :3
punarotta
Fun piece. Only problem that it may not be obvious what happened - at least I thought during 1st/2nd/3rd reading that boy was girl's (boy)friend. Or that girl has serious (secret) crush on him and reacts strongly when he acknowledges her Some visual cue needed?
Stormfries
Great work tg comics I like prefer with a transformation (sequence)
Winkin
And then the other two become futa and yay all problems are resolved. :D *laughs* ^^ Fantastic image.
Kannel
lol yeah xD
Actrus
Oh it's a body switch ?
Actrus
I'm not sure to have totally understand what happens here tbh 😅 sorry
