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CYOA Comic - Who realize what's Happening first? CLOSED
🕑 Added 2020-03-09 20:27:34 +0000 UTC
Hey everyone!
CLOSED:
WINNER OPTION 1
these guys aren't dumb, one of them should figure out eventually that our cute victim is turning into his friend's perfect wife! (or wife to be (?))
So, the question is, who does figure this out first?
This will affect the dynamic of how things progress
1 - If the friend figure this first, he will start testing his theory by thinking what he likes on a girl while our victim change accordingly to his/her surprise.
2- Is our cute, soon to be girl realize this first, she will be the one teasing and inquiring about his friends tastes, in this case she will be looking forward for her changes.
I can really see this going both ways, so, I'm leaving the decision to you instead :3
Current page:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/cyoa-comic-page-34524109
Pages so far:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/cyoa-comic-name-31924240
Deadline: most likely tomorrow, since I want to start working on this one ASAP
Comments
Kaffeyette Lektor
I agree with Dynamoob's analysis, but it could always be that the wife-to-be (WTB) discovers that she feels happy and fulfilled by becoming more attractive to her friend. She may seek to follow that path simply because it feels 'right' or pleasurable for her to do so, without knowing her friend's mind at all. Maybe, it could be linked to his pheromones. As she becomes more attractive to him, he becomes more aroused, unconsciously releasing the pheromones into the air that further excite his WTB, making him seem more desirable to her and making her more obsessed with becoming the object of his desire. The friend may try to reason with her and keep trying to remove the ring, but she would continue to try to please him, growing more amorous and seductive, secetly delighted that he is becoming more flustered and self conscious about his attraction to her.
Joe Etienne
Couldn't have put it better myself!
Dynamoob
I agree with Joe above. So far the friend has been working to stop the ring from doing it's thing. It would be a noticeable character shift if he is to just start pushing the ring's capabilities. On the flip side, unless it is explained how the victim would already know what the friend's dream girl is like, how would she draw that conclusion versus just a general TG transformation? It makes more sense the friend realizes the "perfect wife" situation first since it's in his mind. Perhaps the friend uncontrollably announces his realization aloud, which prompts the victim to inquire about her friend's tastes since she's demonstrated some levels of enjoyment/intrigue in the changes thus far. I feel that makes logical sense while still keeping true to the characterizations to this point.
z
I can so easily see the process being like an improv sketch, both sides getting into the "game" until it's too late.
Joe Etienne
If she becomes aware of it first, that will speed things up, so far he's been eager to stop this process, but she's been at worst confused at best excited by the changes.
