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Double-Blind Ch 203

🕑 Added 2023-01-21 00:49:44 +0000 UTC

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Myrrdin

Is it just me, or does it seem like maybe Miles is actually fine, and has set up a trap of some sort?

MR.K .

Caught all the way up. You REALY need to slow this story down. Everything else is great. But the pacing, I don’t know who you are in a race with but you are going too damn fast. It’s like you a muscle in contant tension, it’s not good. I get that the premise is a chaotic world but please, a moment to slow things down truly won’t hurt the story. At this point the MC himself is overwhelmed and saying it’s too much, too fast. Please


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