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CYOA Second Round
🕑 Added 2017-05-30 00:21:35 +0000 UTC The very last part of the first CYOA is a bit delayed (for another few days maybe), so it seemed better to just go ahead with deciding the next one for now, which starts over from the beginning. Path A leads to guy on guy, Path B leads to guy on girl. Still first person point of view.Vote in the poll above.
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Oatmeal
>no futa lame x3 A I guess.
Nobody in Particular
This CYOA has basically been a test run. I am thinking about changing things up a bit, maybe to much shorter stories that allow for more variation.
TroyL
Well, since we're critiquing over here, I'd like to say I'm not a fan of the idea to make us do all 3 paths in the CYOA. I'd get it if the votes had been close, but as far as I can recall, the choice of Path C over the other two was overwhelming. Now we have to spend months following one of the two unpopular paths, instead of starting with brand new paths that could be way more appealing. Anyway, that's just what I think, you do what you want with it.
Just some critique, but these options have always been grossly unimaginative, seemingly lazy, and just plain uninteresting. Look back on Incases cyoas and you'll see that what made them great is the very defined imaginative, exciting, and diverse options. Most of yours have just been along the lines of "Let her fuck you, or no?" and 9 times out of 10 the winner is obvious right out of the gate. Hoping these get a little better. Again, no hate, and keep up the good work!
