Nguyen Do Khoi Le
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Constraints - Page 21
🕑 Added 2024-09-14 14:00:01 +0000 UTCThe first panel needs some work, need to increase the size of her body. Also forgot to add the tape marks on her face for the second and third panels, alongside the wrist marks to be emphasized in the next page. The original plan was to have no dialogue for the two panels on the left featuring the letter and the guy, but it was looking rather empty. And now, with the dialogue, the self-narration is repeating information, so I'm not sure what to do about that. Also, I have the flow of the page is legible, it's a little bit hard to direct things but I hope the larger cut of the bottom right panel nudges things along.
Just one more page <3
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