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II : Of All The Worlds (2/2)
🕑 Added 2023-01-09 17:00:06 +0000 UTCVulpecula = little fox, that being said…Ouch, poor Johan😬
P.S.: Typo/grammar corrections are always welcome 💀
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Gem
Aha. We have a name for foxy. Also poor Johan, being some random guy.
I love commas 💀💀 But yeah, now that you mentioned, I see it too. 💀💀💀 Thanks for the help! ❤️
Chai
Oooh, things are getting interesting.... Typo Time: "what does Lupus wants?" should probably be "what does Lupus want?" I'll read through again when I have more time to talk about commas, but there's a couple places they could change into periods or be omitted. I get the feeling you're maybe using commas to notate a pause in speech? But you're representing pauses fairly well with the bubble breaks. 👀
