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Rules 8 - Back on the Horse

🕑 Added 2023-04-27 16:11:22 +0000 UTC

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Mr Jakobs

We are getting there my dude. On the final pass/ touchups now!

Amer Gill

How's the editing coming along?

Mr Jakobs

Good catch! That was an editing error, it should've read "deserve her." Also yes its taking a minute to align the pieces, next chapter does feature sex 😎

Amer Gill

When David is talking to Theo,he utters the words,"he(meaning Jeremy)doesn't deserve Sage"It was at this point I thought that the penny would drop and the two men would realise they were talking about the same person.Perhaps Theo didn't quite hear over the noise of the bar.As good as this chapter was,it's the third straight one that doesn't feature any sex of any kind.The frustration is building. There's slow burn and then there's ssslllooowww burn.


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