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Chapter 688 - Above the battlefield
🕑 Added 2025-09-02 09:03:27 +0000 UTCWe return to Black Tower City once the night starts creeping out. In the distance, roars, screeches, and deep vibrations echo as powerful monsters make their way out. Even within the safety of the outpost, we can sense these powerful presences circling around.
It is also the hour when all city guards and the local “king” sitting in his towers make sure the number of people inside does not exceed the limit. They watch from afar in every direction, and I am certain that if any attendee or local rushing into the city caused that number to be broken, they would be killed from a distance, no matter who they were. Either that, or they would be forced to stay outside, far away from the city.
Sometimes I still catch myself thinking how crazy it would be if the city had exactly ten thousand people, and then one more person slipped in, somehow breaking the defenses, however they work.
Weslin and the others separate, each heading to their rooms, the guild facilities, or into the city to blow off steam. I find myself heading back to the basement, into that voidcopper-plated room, waking up the sleeping Doc in the process so we can unlock it.
I want to train. The sheer possibilities opened by my effort and experiments will not let me rest.
And after all, I know there will be more attacks tomorrow.
***
Once the morning comes and we return to the base, my work starts. Complaints are thrown at me as I do so, but I ignore them, connecting to the array surrounding the base. I begin modifying it while taking it fully under my control.
When the ones in charge of it raise their voice even more, I face them with a simple: Make me.
I stare them down, letting my two hearts beat in a twisted, combined rhythm, while the halo over my head spins wildly as my accumulated mana rages inside it.
But they do not try to push me. Unlike Talon, I have set clear boundaries with them. While I do not mind some messing around, there are situations where I truly appreciate being left alone to do what I think is best.
I erase a few supportive webs and change the shape of others. I drain mana storage batteries as I expand the web and connect it to my halo. A few threads float around me, coiling around my arms and shoulders, sticking to them like a sort of 3D tattoo.
It could be said that my work is going smoothly. It is something I have wanted to do for a while, hijacking this kind of array and reshaping it entirely to support what I plan to do next. It takes a few hours, but soon I am done. There are no signs of the triplets or their goons, no trace of that weird field they had made.
Plenty of time remains until night, so I move toward one of the mines. I enter and walk between supporting wooden beams. Every few steps, a symbol is carved into the wall with a tiny mana battery fueling it, making the hallway glow with even light.
There is a shaft heading straight downward. It is wide enough to fit the entire length of a bus. Instead of waiting for the elevator or using stairs, I drop straight into the darkness.
As I fall, inscriptions around me react to my presence and light up, only to turn off once I descend deeper.
Near the bottom, I absorb my momentum to land gently on the floor. A few more steps take me into another wide tunnel where I find a demon and a velnar near one of the veins. It looks like lightning made of molten copper with a bluish shine.
You cannot sell it to the system shop. It has no name. Its mana conductivity is average. Weapons made from it are neither powerful nor special. I tested that much myself, just as many generations of locals and attendees before me did. The only real use for this metal is building up the core of the outpost, according to blueprints left behind by who knows who.
At first, I helped mine it in hopes of increasing my participation and securing better rewards for this floor. Then the doc explained it to me in his twisted way, though it was easy to translate.
Simply put, completing Beyond floor quests from already cleared floors will never be as rewarding. Beyond is different from the tutorial. While it exists on the edge of the real world and the tutorial, it is not the same as either. There are parts of it that even the Rulers cannot influence much, and one of those is the way rewards are given.
The only exception is clearing the 5th floor and advancing to the 6th, something only a rare few are able to achieve. Otherwise, the other floors were cleared many times before. At first, by the Rulers who found this place called the First Dungeon. After they reached floors they could not clear, they tried to connect the dungeon to the system and the tutorial system, succeeding in some places and failing in others.
In some way, it could be said there are three separate systems. The main system, which seems to cover the entire universe and continuously expands, forcing newly initiated planets into Pairings. Another subsystem for the tutorial. Then there is the First Dungeon, running on a different version. Similar to the other two, but distinct.
To simplify it further, while my participation needs to be acknowledged for me to complete the 3rd floor quest, it does not need to be impressive, since the rewards will not improve much. I already mined plenty, killed monsters, and did my best to protect the outpost’s construction. That much the system will take into account.
It also confirms what I have suspected for a long time. For an average attendee, the Beyond might not be all that worth it. But the powerful, the lucky, or the smart attendees can gain a lot from it. Information, connections, Beyond quests, Beyond events, any of these can be more valuable than tutorial floor rewards, yet at the same time, they can be far worse.
In the end, it is truly a place between the real world and the tutorial. It grants advantages to the First generation, though muted, and rewards those who put in the effort.
“Came to mine with us again, mana boy?” the demon asks first, using my appearance in the mine as an excuse to sneak in a cheeky break.
At this point, I do not even bother trying to stop him. I broke his arm multiple times, but it only made him more determined to call me that. A part of me suspects he might have heard Talon say it once and decided to keep the nickname.
“One day I will bury you down here,” I note.
The demon gives it a thought. “That would be interesting to try. I wonder how long it would take me to get out. There is half a mile to the surface, the rock surrounding us is…”
I ignore him as he starts making calculations with a bright look in his eyes, and turn to the velnar. “Ehm, I might have broken the array that kept the air circulating down here when I was taking over. I tried to fix it, but it has that terrible design I hate.”
The velnar just stares at me without saying anything.
“Soo… I hope you could fix it, like before.”
“Fifth time,” he says.
“Ehm.”
“This is the fifth time you have broken it and then asked me to fix it. You say it is a terrible design, but that is only because I had to patch it up after you broke it the first time. And the second. Then the third. And then you and Weslin kept telling us to hurry, while you never gave us time to make a new, proper one. What did you expect?”
“I mean, your patch worked pretty well.”
The velnar stares at me again, and in the background, the demon continues to estimate how much rock falling on him would be required to crush his body.
I initiate a transfer, sending five thousand shards to the velnar.
He rejects.
I make it ten thousand.
He accepts.
I quickly leave, feeling his gaze on my back until I disappear around the corner.
As night starts closing in and I finish a conversation with Talon, movement finally happens. The three marks inside the Black Tower move outside of the city, heading our way.
Talon’s words fade into the background as I stand up from the chair I am sitting in. The mana inside my halo spins faster, and the array I took over awakens. My Mana Wavelength Iris activates, aided by my Mana Physique and my unique arcane passive.
When Weslin looks at me, I gesture that I will take care of it, even as more presences start appearing and encircling the outpost. I detect multiple powerful items and mana batteries filled to the brim. These people cooperate, setting up an array just beyond the edge of ours, though not the same one that brought darkness. And they wait for the triplets.
I follow my marks, sharpening my sight in the right direction, and see the three lumorans appear just out of range.
They stand there. Watching. Calculating. Dragging out the moment. It is predictable, almost dull, and most of all, it is disappointing.
I stay ready to accept their challenge, but they hesitate and wait, delaying the attack, as if hesitation makes them clever.
A snort escapes me without my realizing, and I rise into the air.
So be it.
***
POV Talon
The moment he rises into the air and Weslin's void energy starts to flicker around us in defense, I know things are about to go crazy. And they do.
Around Nathaniel, segments of his barrier light up as attacks rain down while he makes himself a target. That halo over his head becomes a darker blue, and the mana inside of it spins faster and faster while the flashes of attacks explode around him. Then that halo expands to ten times its size, and in the next moment shrinks back and turns pitch black.
The parts of our defensive array he took over light up, supporting him in whatever he was doing, and our industrial rated mana batteries drain in a few seconds. Then that black halo starts pulling on mana in the area. Mana from me, mana from the offensive array our opponents set, even from the ambient mana.
Still just floating there, most of the attacks don't even reach him now, breaking into mana particles before they even get close, only to get devoured by that black halo.
A pulse erupts from Nathaniel, and the world around us drains of color. The effect spreads further outward, swallowing even the area around the attackers. Only the golden rings around his pupils remain, burning brighter against the dark.
While the enemies scatter around, erratic in their attempts to counter him, he calmly lifts an arm into the air, palm facing the sky. The projectile forms there. Threads of luminous mana coil and fuse, pulsing with a heartbeat, forging a lance whose core blazes with golden-white light. It shoots ahead, near silent, but leaving a trail of pale blue, white, and gold, much more vibrant in the black and white shade surrounding us.
The lance pierces through whatever defenses the enemy made and kills one of them.
Another lance forms right after, repeating the process.
The triplets in the distance gather together a circle of pale-blue mana glowing around them, spinning wildly. Their crystals glow, and similarly glowing white tattoos appear on their black bodies. The air trembles with the danger of their attack. A single purple projectile forms, a pyramid with a blazing white core, before shooting toward Nathaniel. It burns like a falling star, the sides of the pyramid flashing with shifting hues.
Nathaniel doesn’t move to evade. He halts the formation of another lance and simply watches the incoming projectile as it shakes the air around it.
But the same like the previous attacks, before it comes within reach, it starts to dissolve on the edges, already breaking apart. Halfway through the process, it explodes, a countermeasure likely set by the triplets. The explosion paints the sky purple before it drains to black and white. Nathaniel still floats in place, untouched, the only change being a larger halo glowing above his head.
A smile spreads across his face, his eyes wide open like a demon’s, the golden circles of his trait burning with an endless, unnatural light.
Once again, he lifts his arm into the air, palm facing the sky. That movement is faster, more energetic, and almost playful. His smile widens.
Then a purple pyramid with a white core starts forming there instead of a lance. The pyramid spins, each side reflecting the nonexistent lights in the area. A thread of mana stretches from the black halo, latching onto the pyramid and pouring mana into it until it swells to three times the size of what the triplets created.
I sense Weslin near me getting into action now and more of his void energy seeps into the area, stacking defenses around us while he mumbles something, but the entire time I'm unable to take my eyes off that pyramid.
The assault on Nathaniel intensifies. Dozens of projectiles, each in different colors and shapes, crash toward him—some dissolving into mana before they reach him, others sparking his barrier to life in brief flashes.
His domain, draining all color, expands even further and engulfs the enemies attacking him. Like me, they discover they cannot use any mana skills outside their bodies, and only my Stellar Wind still answers.
With a roar like tearing metal, the pyramid rips ahead, the air shuddering under its speed beyond what the triplets managed.
The pyramid slams into the spot where the triplets once stood, the explosion still catching them as they run away. The blast expands, the area warping under its heat. The surface ripples like liquid waves, stone melting and surging forward before hardening into a jagged sheet of glass. A moment later, the glass detonates, bursting into a storm of fine, razor-sharp particles that ride the shockwave outward, grinding everything in their path to nothing.
I start turning back towards Nathaniel when hundreds, thousands of finger long projectiles made of pale blue mana pass through the black sky, each trailing a line of glimmering mana behind them. They pour across the sky like a storm of falling stars, all streaking toward the triplets as more and more follow in their wake.
Another lance shoots off in the opposite direction, breaking the barrier and skewering an attacker with effortless precision. A moment later, a second lance follows. Attack after attack kills B ranks, maybe even A ranks, without them even being able to stop them. Unable to use most of their escape skills at all, with mana constantly slipping out of their control.
In these moments, his mana feels bottomless, surging without end. Just the fact that it sustains that monstrous domain is impossible to grasp.
Then the black halo above him finally unravels, the last thread of mana drawn back into his body. And when it’s gone, he looks unchanged, as if he hadn’t spent anything at all.
Above the battlefield, Nathaniel hovers untouched.
Bit by bit, color seeps back into the air, painting over the black and white world. Yet it feels fragile, as if it could vanish the moment he wills it.
***
Comments
Chun
Every time Nat is about to fight and there’s a POV switch, pure dopamine straight to the veins 🥴
CrypticAnon
Having some time to think about it, this reminds me of Lissandra hijacking that mind mage network back on floor 5. Not sure if it’s the same situation scaled down, but dam cool regardless.
Asterrahl
Hot damn. I wasn't expecting this! I'm fired up! It was awesome and satisfying, and the Talon pov was perfect to deliver it.
AFunkyLad
By the holy mana stats that was so entertaining to read, at this point Nat can basically copy any mana based skill on the fly just through his sheer skill and perception it’s insane
Grappleshot
What is written suggests people outside at night simply, cease to exist leaving behind only the clothes.
daniel singleton
Same the things he considers normal and what everyone else considers insane it what I love about this novel
Sheldon Harriott
The POV from Talon was beautifully done.
Anders Budaj
TFTC I’m getting the Void from marvel vibes from Nathaniel in this fight. Only being able to see his golden eyes. Love this chappy
Peter Toninato
Can’t spell dominate without Nat
Semper Malus
Great shit by the way. By far one of my favorite stories.
Semper Malus
I hope you don't start having some kind of fucking mental crisis. Too many of these authors I've been following lately are breaking down and getting the sad. It's starting to get ridiculous.
frankie doerr
He sold his manabloc in the form of weapons and armor
Marshall
I wonder how hard it is to not use a mechanic a writer puts in a story. Like the population limit on a fort. It would kill me not to see how the chars react when the worst happens.
Arnon Parenti
LOOT!!! stupid contract probably gives all the best loot to Primordial Knaves!
Thomas Bell
I love the external PoVs because Nats perspective is so warped you forget what a beast he is.
Sean Andrews
Amazing
RnR_ RnR
I think this is why I love the POV on earth. When they talk about group four its always like s shiver running down their spine. I almost wish they have him his 24 hours back on earth. And the whole sequence in others pov.
Arnon Parenti
The only normal person in the tutorial
zoarian
Reading this again, "Mana Tyrant" would be a super appropriate nickname.
Joe Woodhouse
Nat: After my training with impossible shapes such as the Klein Bottle, Escher Triangle, etc., the pyramid is trivial to copy. The triplets remain disappointing. It is not even worth filling it with black mana. I am almost insulted. Pushing my domain in such a way feels natural, almost effortless. It is as if, instead of imposing [Eclipse] on the world, I am removing what stops [Eclipse] from being there all the time. Is this what that coward feels like when he uses [Dawn]? It will be interesting to try this in the Third Tournament. Perhaps I will call this Primordial Nathaniel. Such a normal, natural, name.
DarkRain
Sending shards isnt possible in the tutorial but can be done in beyond for a tax by the system
Isaac Lung
The first beyonder.
Poutine Au Syrop d'érable
Btw. Earlier. I thought they couldn't send shard. They had to unlock it. Eladore coordinate training. And buying rewards for the others. When qaa that ublocked?
Andrew
Thank you!
Kirin
Thank you for the chappie! Aura farming hits different when it’s from an alternate perspective
Gravitea
Amazing chapter! Glad Nat actually got some fun, and LOVING the external perspective of people seeing him do crazy stuff 🖤 The writing gives me chills!
Manther
Wonder who the Eternal Clowns have to deal with Morwag. Someone who can deal with S ranks, but not necessarily S rank themselves? An assassin? What if they’ve managed to hire Tacita? Morwag might be fucked.
JTP
I love seeing him from other perspectives, and I love seeing him dominate.
tishane Imperial MageKiller
Sheesh once you can see his teeth 😬 😳 run
13L00D13ANE
I *am* actually super stoked to see/hear the fallout of the fight. Will they double down or back off? Im betting on Eternal Clowns taking the twins warnings lightly and doubling down.
Greg Lambert
Such a fun chapter. Well done
13L00D13ANE
Nah, thatll have to wait till 3rd tourney XD
RJ
Ma boy getting nasty!
Mark Bullock
Great chapter; loved the spell steal..!; I've imagined that this all happened in seconds; just so he can start copying cockroach...
TheOne320
Because they can still use mana in their bodies.
TheOne320
Epic chapter.
rams
Murtaugh, I mean Weslin, was definitely muttering I am too old for this mana maniac shit!
Seijax
The air-recycling dev's complain triggers software devs everywhere
Fdrugc
If they can't use mana why is nat using Empyrean Lance instead of something mana cheaper
Seijax
Natman
William Johnson
To be fair, his handler is Greed. I can't imagine anyone wants that smoke.
William Johnson
Never give Nat time to prepare, it will not end well.
Michael Williams
Yes! I imagined his internal dialogue in that scene the same way haha. He truly is a beast now.
trainedturtle
aura
Fdrugc
Tftc seeing nat fight from another perspective is awesome also has nat ever tried selling mana, black mana or some other energy to the system?
caeven
this chapter was peak Nat glaze😭 Ive been saying, the difference between how those stronger and those weaker perceives him will never stop being hilarious.
Adrian Rake
What a fight. Nat is a really scary enemy to deal with 🙂👍
Jinaden
@Cerim, you are a treasure! That was fucking epic from Nat
Claro reyes
Tftc
Forcewagon
"It Was At This Moment They Knew... They Fucked Up"
Nerø
I think the mana projectiles were inspired by the attacks of the Harvester...
Lance Beam
Chadthaniel
Sergei Hartwig
Love the POV Chapters
Seijax
Lovely. Hopefully the triplets are dead from that, it would be a great way for him to show how little he cares about handlers and their politics
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
Daniel Playford
It's always funny how different Nathan's perspective is to other people's. He would be like: they shot a pyramid at me, it was cool so I observed it. Then I made a better one and shot it back. Calm and collected, not laughing like a maniac at all. I'm totally the most normal of group 4, even round 5 I dare say
Abhishek
Yeah my boi be growing! Mana all the way! Tftc
frankie doerr
It eclipses someone’s authority or at least that’s what Nat uses it for
zoarian
Damn, Nat is one scary mofo. Mana attacks can't reach him, physical attacks get stopped by Kinetic PE. Only other PEs and Fragments have any real chance of getting to him. Plus he has great regeneration and strong perception. What a solid foundation. Being in Primordial Knights is actually so fitting... if he gains knowledge on various PEs and how to deal with them, that's a big weakness covered. Also, dude has a fucking Sharingan. His unique arcane passive + trait + skill with mana and he just copies the pyramid attack lol. I wonder if the rain of small mana projectiles were copying some of the Empyrean Lance? They had trailing lights which is one of the main visual features of the Lance.
Nimps
I am imagining fan girls swooning and shouting "KYAAA MANA DADDY!"
Anthony Duenas
Manna Daddy!!! Deciding nobody else gets to use manna, totally normal thing to do. A normal guy, that's him
Xana
What does eclipse do exactly again?
Nerø
I did! So I read it two more times. Now it feels adequately long🤣
Emmanuel Martinez
I never knew a chapter could make you come. But it did. Well fucking done, Cerim! The build up and payload is AMAZING, and it’s not even thursday! I sense a huge cliff incoming
Predyca
Thx for the chappy
Oaktree
Triplets: oh we screwed up big time. Like wtf was that. Eternal clown’s leaders: what do you mean you only fought one person. Triplets: one guy who has unlimited mana.
mitchell kaiser
Let’s go!
frankie doerr
Well did anyone else think this chapter was short
Nerø
Oops, my bad. It isn't even a showdown against the Triplets. It's more like a spanking lol
Dr.Awkward
Tftc! This was so siiiiick!!
Aoth the Arcane
Epic!
Hamish
The chapters when we see it from the "average" attendees perspective are brillant.
Lizy Flore
Worth the wait. This was SO epic.
Nerø
YAY!
vEnviouz
TFTC!!!
