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Chapter 66: Finale of Promise

🕑 Added 2020-02-24 21:19:56 +0000 UTC

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V01D

“Knowledge of the DAMNED”

Joseph Marcia

thanks for the corrections. I'll make the changes soon.

Joseph Marcia

There were some loose ends to tie up for sure. I'll go over the details in the next chapter. I might go back and expand this out with a few more details in the interim.

Joseph Marcia

There was enough stuff in this chapter without getting into the nitty gritty details of what happened to Taylor's body in this chapter. It's one of the main things I'm gonna cover in the next chapter. As a non-spoiler answer, Taylor has found a way to mitigate the influx of Order and Chaos from affecting her too much, and she's hoping that a new body, or sorting out her old one, will help her solve the rest. Currently Taylor 2 is in the "real" body, while our Taylor is made fully of solid energy. As for Trigon, it's not something that will come up soon, and will be appropriately foreshadowed when it becomes relevant again. Not exactly helpful, but that's what I got.

Joseph Marcia

Well, see, no one really knows where a spark is (except for the phyrexians) so who's to say it isn't simultaneously in Talyor's body and her soul. Now, it's not gonna work out that neatly, but that's for next chapter.

Impasse

Isn't MCU!Taylor supposed to be missing her spark? How would she be able to lead DC!Taylor to the correct plane?

robofin117

A little rushed at the end there, but liked the closure. I kind of want some mystical consultation from New York's resident Master of the Mystic Arts in the future, but only if the story has room for it. Outside of the minor typos below, well done. (I glared at him, even as Adrammelech was [brought] down and buried under weight of numbers. “I’ll kill you,” I said.) (I hissed. “I agree.” I said. At once I felt something snap into place, binding the [two] of us together in an contract.) (The moment she spoke, the rest of the team reoriented, moving with smooth efficiency to surround the villains and the entity currently wearing my skin. “So…” Robin ventured. “What’s up with the evil twin[?]”)

Varisis

I would say it got pretty rushed once you got to arresting Lex, no idea what happened with the twin and that seemed like a bigger deal.

Tersin

The ending was fine. Not the most exciting, but not all endings are. It wrapped things up, and Taylor getting templates of the team was a great touch that for what ever reason I didn't see coming. I hope that Raven pulls herself together enough to hear what Taylor promised because everybody knowing what's coming could be very important. Also glad that Raven didn't hold the deal against her, which I could have easily seen happening. Still Taylor took the deal. I knew she would, but damn. Now until that gets resolved I'm going to be constantly worrying about the on rushing doom. Please give us some hope for that situation soon? Like, if they're going back to the MCU as implied, can Destiny look up Dr. Strange? Isn't dealing with things like Trigon basically his job? He should be able to help. Just... really need some optimism after getting screwed that hard. Also, what ever happened to her losing herself to the chaos and order plains? Did that get fixed with Trigon's knowlage or is it still an issue? And as near as I can tell, Destinaylor just spontaneously generated a new body? And MCU!Taylor got her old one? Does MCU!Taylor now have the issues with getting lost to the planes of order and chaos? And why isn't anybody worried about Detinaylor getting a new body apparently out of whatever deal she made with Trigon? That seems like a big obvious trap, who knows what else he put in there? Really the body situation is very confusing. Just so we're clear, that all of this bothers me so much is a compliment. It's good stuff, just, is it too much to ask for some actual improvement? Going from finally getting over her depression to getting mind controlled by her 'teacher', and letting that happen still seems like an act of stupidity that Taylor really should have known better than, to immediately having Trigon get his hooks in her? This downward trend has to stop eventually, right? Please? I can only handle so much of things always getting worse before I have to stop reading for my own mental health. And I really, REALLY, don't want to stop reading.

Jeffrey Gassenheimer

The word promise definitely fits with the chapter, but the actual events feel more Finale of Glory to me.


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