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WWC - 2/5

🕑 Added 2025-05-31 20:15:24 +0000 UTC

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potato

Finally caught up on the story and found some typos. I don't remember chapters, but hopefully you can ctrl F and find them? “I know Nia,” Imre glances at you, “and you know Nia. We gave her a few days but she's proud. She won't come to us but she will be more recipient* to us if we go to her.” *receptive​​ “I mean did you know she wasn't born* town?” *in town Although this phrasing is awkward, maybe "wasn't born here?" “You don’t have to handle she beautiful, I can do it for you.” *she​ "How his other brother sits on the ground and puts his hand* in his hands, not knowing why he can’t cry." *head "You straddle* you once more and wraps his hands around your neck." *He straddles "To see* scare the hell outta of you before it kills you or swallows you up; whatever comes first." *see should be deleted PS I think Lorcan is actually the least bad. Nia might care the most for MC but she's so passive. At least Lorcan said something during James' confrontation.

potato

people should be compensated for the work they do. it's literal theft to do this :/


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