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Chapter 154: Siege Pt.3

🕑 Added 2021-04-14 20:39:49 +0000 UTC

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Rokatsa

Recall first and foremost that while those points are most likely true for Mortal, Non-magical battles, this is a Magical war, the strength was not only in the people, but the creatures as well that were killed in the first wave. Harry's people don't have nearly as much freedom with their own, not only because they care about them as more then mere beasts, but because they wouldn't willingly sacrifice thousands of griffin kin for a tactic that is likely to get them all killed. Also, there is a reason the Blacks and Greengrass aren't there. First, Harry wants to keep the Black alliance silent for now, and second he MUST fight his own battles, his MUST prove himself, because he is a new player in their games, he can't hide behind other peoples power. A second reason for the Black army not to be there is quite simple...they are likely prepping for war against the Malfoys

I apologize for my bad english A great chapter and very exciting. That said, I would recommend to the author that if he is going to continue writing battles, read a military history book, To besiege a castle and take it by storm, a minimum strength of 5 to 1 is needed and from what I understand from the previous chapters Potter and Nott's forces are more or less equal, also a castle as old as Potter's should have a well. that would prevent the siege towers from approaching the walls and although all that we cannot take into account there are two things that seem serious flaws, the first and the minor that he did not leave out and hid the Demigryph legion to give a charge from behind . . at the right time and two and most importantly, Harry is also the heir of the black and I find it strange that his legions are not here and also Lord Nott has attacked the heiress of Greengrass so it would also be logical since they are also engaged And they are allies that the Greengrass legions were here. Of course I say this with the best of intentions and without the intention of offending, I just want to enhance the already fantastic story I am reading.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

KristofferXxXxX

Let's see if Theodore Nott will finally fall in the next chapter :3


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