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Chapter 114: Dumbledore vs Voldemort

🕑 Added 2021-01-14 21:41:49 +0000 UTC

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I take it that nigeena somehow got a huge downgraded in the original battle of Hogwarts to be killed by some weakling wielding a sword and yes I know Neville did get ok at the end but it's still get bitchslapped by any competent fighter and he somehow chop the head off nigeena yes it's a magical sword but it still wielded by a amateur. Thanks for the chapter on a good story

that is dumbledore for u pretending to be the good guy.

Darkanlan

Making dumbledore out to be a shining light seemed wrong. If you made him into a hole that sucked out the light of the world it'd fit better with his constantly sending children to die to further his goals. As for riddle, it'd be better if he was more a pustule looking light that was being pulled into dumbledore's void. Feel like that'd be the better representation of the two.

capture her and do the same ritual that harry undertook to remove his Horcrux.

Are you going to capture Nagini and extract/transfer the Horcrux to destroy it? Maybe transfer it into Peter? And I don't know if it works this way (if it did 'Oh the Torture') but a Horcrux is a soul fragment, if a Dementors Kiss sucks out your soul but your soul is linked to a Horcrux, would that mean that they wouldn't die completely and therefore be an endless food source to that Dementors?

Man this was a beast to write! I hope you enjoy, one more chapter and I conclude everything.


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