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TMLoCL - Extra - Chaurl P1
🕑 Added 2020-12-14 07:45:25 +0000 UTCWas put on a new medication last week and started having huge anxiety issues. I'm back off that medication now, and hopefully planning to get everything back on track.
Here is the first half of Chaurl's Extra to tide you over until tonight! Sorry for the trouble - again.
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*Kingdom of Frakus, The Grand Temple, Eighteen Years Ago*
Chaurl Kent’s POV:
In the beginning, there was Nothing. Then, there was The First One.
From Beyond, The First One created a space in the Great Emptiness and stepped into it, thus The First One created the Void and the Void consumed the Emptiness insatiably. As the Void grew, The First One drew from it its blood and from that blood created Substance.
And the Void howled in pain, distracted from its feast. It turned upon Substance and tried to return it to itself - to render all into Void - but The First One held the Void back and it could do nothing against The First One’s might.
“Who is ‘The First One?’” I asked my mom as I sat on her lap. I wanted to read, but I hated the Wisdoms who taught in the Temple’s classrooms. I’d try to hide and avoid them, but they always caught me somehow - and then they always gave me even more work to do! “Where did they come from?”
“No one knows,” mom said with a smile. “Perhaps only Lady Alet herself knows for certain, but she has never answered anyone who has asked.”
“I thought I had memorized all the Gods,” I had been proud of that. There were a lot of Gods and Goddesses, so it had been hard work! “But no one told me about The First One!”
“That is because we don’t worship them - no one does.”
“They sound mean anyway,” I announced. Void was scary, but stealing its blood was wrong.
Mom just laughed and started reading again.
The First One subdued the Void and created a cage from Substance to separate the Void from the Great Emptiness. Then, The First One created another cage and separated what would become the World from the Void. The Void would claw at the walls between itself and the Great Emptiness, but its claws could not leave a mark so it turned upon the cage within itself and found that it could scar it.
However, it could not break it. While the Void had raged at the loss of its food and its blood, The First One had shaped a being within and named that being Order. The First One touched Order’s brow and granted Order the Spark of Life. While the Void was a creature of instinct - a Monster whose intelligence was born of its feasting on the Great Emptiness - Order was Sapient and was free to choose.
And so The First One asked Order, “Will you uphold Creation?”
And Order answered with the determination they were born with, “I will, and always.”
This pleased The First One, who connected Order to the cage that separated the World from the Void. Order, dutiful to his task, spake thusly:
“I am all that is, and I bend to nothing but my creator and my own will. Order I am, and Order there will be, for I was granted the power to make it so and as I make it, it is.”
And so, Order created all of the Laws of the World and they were immutable and inviolable. That Substance would call to Substance; that Substance could never be destroyed, nor created again; and that Substance would obey the forces upon it by those who would be born upon the World that would be.
Order was proud of his Laws, yet in their youth they fell to hubris.
Thus Order had spake, “The Void shall never be able to break the bonds that separate it from this World.”
And thus it was, but while the Void could not break the cage, it could rend it. And so Order always had to watch the border between the World and the Void lest the Void whisper through the tears it made and convince a Sapient to let it in.
“Order was kind of dumb,” I wouldn’t have messed up like that! “Why didn’t he just change it so that the Void couldn’t damage the cage?”
“Order cannot change,” mom answered. “They too, are bound by their Laws.”
“But couldn’t they just make a new Law that makes them not bound?” I was quite smug that I had managed to think of a better way than a God! Maybe Order would take my advice and I would become a [High Priest] - or a God myself!
Mom just laughed and started reading again. The Wisdoms had been furious that I didn’t know this story already, but their voices made me fall asleep! I could never listen when they talked - mom was different though.
Order pleaded with The First One, but The First One would not help Order anymore than they would help the Void. Instead, The First One took another piece of Substance and held it out to the Void. The Void was cunning, but a slave to its desires. It knew that something was wrong, but it could not ignore its hunger and bit into the Substance.
But as its fangs bit into its meal, it found that it couldn’t retract them! The First One pulled the Substance back and tore the fangs from the Void’s mouth, leaving it screaming behind them as it returned to the World.
To this mass of Substance, laced with Void, The First One granted the Spark of Life - but The First One had not shaped it. Chaos was born fighting the echoes of the Void’s hunger and the ghost of Order’s bonds that lay upon its Substance. Chaos was the first Demihuman and wielded the Void’s power with Order’s strength, yet was never able to reach its full potential.
Chaos turned to its creator and asked The First One, “You chained and abused my elders, what will you force on me, oh great one?”
The First One merely laughed while shaping Substance into the planet and the stars and all that was in the World. The First One was still laughing when they finished and returned to the Beyond.
The Three fought among themselves, with Order and Void always at odds with each other. Chaos, as was its nature, would help or hinder either Order or Void according to its whims, always assuring that neither could ever truly win. Yet, it was bitter, because it knew why The First One had laughed at it.
The First One had not needed to bind it in any way, because Chaos would do as The First One wanted without being bound.
“But Chaos was doing what it wanted, right?” I didn’t get it. If Chaos did what it wanted, why was it unhappy? If mom wanted me to eat cookies, I wouldn’t be unhappy to eat cookies.
“Chaos isn’t Chaos if it is following a plan,” mom turned the page. “Just as Order cannot go against its own rules, Chaos can't go with any for long - it is against its nature to be bound by its own nature.”
I didn’t get it… Chaos couldn’t be Chaos? But how would Chaos not be Chaos because it was Chaos!? It was confusing, so I ignored it.
Chaos approached Order, and seduced it. From their coupling, the first Gods were born.
Order gave birth to a woman - for she was born fully grown - and the Goddess spoke to her mother saying:
“Mother, I will be - I am - Alet,” and thus was Truth born. While her mother was blind to the movements and desires of the Void and those born with the Void’s touch, Alet was as much a daughter of Chaos as she was of Order, and she knew her father as she knew her mother - and so nothing in the World was hidden from her sight.
Chaos gave birth to a man - born fully grown - and the God whispered to his mother saying:
“Mother, I won’t tell you who I am, but you know me well enough, for what I am is Secrets, and I will hold yours in confidence,” and thus was Secrets born. While his mother was unable to fully restrain and escape her nature, he knew all that was kept hidden because he was the Secrets themselves. He followed behind his mother, and lent her his subtlety. What else he does, perhaps only his sister knows.
“Wait, how can they both be mothers?” A [Priestess] of Love had told me where babies came from, and while it seemed kind of weird and icky, I did know that there was supposed to be a mom and a dad to make a baby!
“Order, Chaos, and Void are neither and both male and female,” mom explained, making even less sense than when she talked about Chaos before. Why did all of this have to be so confusing… She noticed that I had stopped paying attention to her explanation and ruffled my hair, which I hated!
“To simplify it, Order is Truth’s mother and Secret’s father; while Chaos is Secret’s mother and Truth’s father.”
That didn’t seem simple at all…
The fighting continued, but now Order and Chaos were accompanied by their children. The brother and sister met on the battlefield and while their parent’s both hated and loved each other, the siblings held no compassion for each other. Their power nearly rivaled their parents, and their fighting shook the ground and split the sky and all that lived on the young World hid in terror and pleaded with the Three to stop the siblings before they tore apart the World itself.
Chaos refused, unwilling to hurt its children even though Alet fought for Order, but Order’s nature moved him to action. The World was their duty and purpose, and they could no more let their children break it than they could let Void do so. Yet when they tried to stop Alet from fighting her brother, they found himself powerless before her.
Order was, by their very nature, bound to their actions. Everything they attempted, Alet knew ahead of time and was ready for. Order, for all of their power, could bring none of it against their daughter and the fighting continued and the world suffered.
Alet saw the young mortal beings - mostly ignored by the others - and saw their potential. She spoke the Truth to them, granting them knowledge and power just below her own. Even with her mother no longer fighting with her, Truth was unstoppable with her army of mortals armed with the knowledge of the Gods.
The mortals were bound by nothing, and used their power to conquer and dominate all beneath the Gods. The evil they perpetrated is unspeakable, hidden from history by the God of Secrets lest horror overwhelm any who learn of it.
Order, in desperation, turned to their eternal enemy and made a deal with the Void itself. They coupled, and Order gave birth to Scalus, God of Justice. Scalus saw his sister’s actions and saw that it was wrong. He met with his sister and demanded she stop, but Alet saw that he was weaker than her and ignored him.
Alet had inherited her mother’s hubris and while she could have looked deeper and seen the future, she did not. She thought that nothing could challenge her and that she deserved to rule the World and the Void, and believed that Void would be even easier to defeat than her mother. Both Order and Void were easy for Truth to discern - it was her father and brothers that she had even the smallest difficulty reading.
She could have known that she had a sister as well. She could have known that her two brothers and her sister would ambush her and her army. She could have defeated them if she had looked sooner, but she did not and her hubris ended her ambition.
Moria, the daughter of Order and Void, and the Goddess of Death joined Scalus and Secrets in fighting Alet. The Mortal Gods, confident that their numbers would overwhelm even a true Goddess, attacked her.
Moira spake to the charging mortals, “to be mortal is to die. No matter what you do, no matter what life you lead, you will meet me at the end of your days. Today, you have met me and so your days must be ended.”
And they died, for Death walked among them and no mortal could conquer her.
Meanwhile, Alet fought Scalus and Secrets and was winning. She was Truth, and Truth always was. A mystery might obscure the Truth, but no secret could change it; the Truth could be Judged, but no Judgement could change it either, for the Truth was.
But Justice was not his mother, nor was he his sister. Beyond Truth was the Laws set down by Order, and The First One had not aided the young Order in making them. Order made mistakes, and the World was cruel and unfair as a result, yet Order could do nothing to change it; Order was even unable to ask Chaos for aid.
Justice was not his mother, and he invited his father to help because even Law could be unjust. The God of Secrets obscured the plan from Alet’s cursory examination and she was struck low by Void.
And yet, she could not be taken by Death. Moira held no power over Alet, for the Truth was. Void struck out again, yet Void could not halt Alet either and soon Order arrived to push Void back from the World. Scalus could strike Alet, but he was not powerful enough to stop her. It took Scalus and the God of Secrets working together to defeat her.
It was then that Alet was able to see past her hubris again and spake these words, “what will be, will be; what is inevitable, is inevitable; you know not what will come from this moment, but you could have never done anything different. Let it be known that even I could not avert the Truth, although I did try.”
Those were the last words she would ever speak aloud because before Justice could be rendered, the God of Secrets moved and cut out Alet’s tongue.
“Ewww,” that was icky.
“Ewww?” Mom sounded amused, “Of all your reactions, you choose ‘ewww’ Char?”
“The God of Secrets had to grab Alet’s tongue,” he would have had to stick his hand in her mouth! “It is gross!”
And he cursed her in her weakness, that she might only speak the Truth to Justice and never again to mortals or Gods again. And yet, Justice floundered, because he then knew that his elder sister had moved out of a belief of necessity. Alet, her mouth bloody, smiled and laughed and whispered the Truth through the blood.
No one save Justice himself and Truth herself knew what she whispered, nor what Judgement was rendered unto her. Thus was the First War of the Gods ended and the Gods turned towards the world ruined in their wrath. The Gods were powerful, and yet the World cried out for more than they could give, and so the Gods had children themselves.
Justice fathered Jakkus, the God of Ambition, with Chaos and the people of the World were filled with the desire to improve it. Chaos also was the father to Mercy, who was the daughter of Chaos and Death.
It would be Mercy that would blind Justice, that Justice may only act on what Truth was told to him.
“But that is a story for another time,” Mom said to me. “For now, it is time for bed Char.”
“Wait, who is Jakkus?” That wasn’t a name I remembered, and I had been so proud that I had remembered them all!
“Not all the Gods are good to worship,” Mom replied, but that wasn’t an answer! “You will understand more when you are older.”
“Ok…” I try to keep myself calm and pretend I took that for an answer as mom tucks me into bed, but I know where I can go to check! I just have to keep myself awake for another couple of hours until my mother is asleep and then I can sneak into the library myself! No one has ever caught me before, well, aside from the [Priests] of Alet - they always knew what I was doing!
They never told anyone though, so it didn’t really matter to me. I hated waiting for my mom to fall asleep though - it was hard not to fall asleep myself and it was boring just sitting in bed and waiting for her to go to sleep!
Hours later, I snuck through the halls of the temple and into the library. I wasn’t seen by anyone that mattered - just a [Priestess] of Secrets and a [Priest] of Alet, and they either wouldn’t or couldn’t tell anybody else - so I was free to check the Book of the Gods.
I had never directly read it before, the Wisdoms had given me a list of Gods to memorize that was taken from this book, but I had never looked at it myself. It was on a shelf above my head and just barely in my reach. When I pulled it down I found that it was very heavy too!
I started to scan through it, looking for Jakkus and found that there were a lot of Gods that the Wisdoms had left out! Decay, Destruction, Evolution… They did not seem like nice Gods, but wasn’t the purpose of the Gods to uphold the World?
Eventually, I found Jakkus, the God of Ambition, but his entry was empty save for a single sentence:
“If you could have any one thing, what would it be?”
I wasn’t sure, there were a lot of things I wanted. Infinite cookies, to escape from the Wisdoms, to know who my father was… How would someone ever decide what one thing to take when offered everything? Oh…
“I would take everything,” I whispered confidently. “‘Everything’ is one ‘thing,’ right? Just like a cookie is made up of parts of a cookie!”
“An excellent answer, child.” A voice whispered behind me, and I dropped the book in surprise and whipped around to see… Nothing...
Comments
Don’t Censor Hentai
it is pointless world building, that will not matter ever.
Melting Sky
You have terrible taste. This is excellent world building. Would it have helped if the Goddesses were topless?
Dmitry Fedorov
Jakkus doesnt seem to be about _having_ everything. He is about _wanting_ everything.
Don’t Censor Hentai
sorry but this is extremely boring, why would I want to read this when I haven't even looked at the bible?
GingerClanger
If your ambition is "Everything".. Then Jakkus would need to be more powerful than "The First One" as even he is under everything, just as is.. The Great Emptiness and Void..
TroubleFait
Yeah, that "spake" was funny. It also sounded like old language, making it interesting to keep.
Anton Lupanov
One of the MC's party members, priest of Jakkus, god of Ambition.
Deinos
Hah nice chappy! Who is char again?
Ethan Norton
Pretty fucking good
Patrick S.
Well, I didn't expected more worldbuilding. But the chapter is soo nice! Keep up the good work 😊
Harrison
You wrote it it’s blood in the first paragraph. Im pretty sure you wrote spake somewhere to but I can’t find it. Other than that great chapter
Vorquel
Well that was something.
In-Game_Name
Pleasantly surprised you posted so late, was gonna sleep, now I’m gonna read
