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preview to AIC 28

🕑 Added 2017-09-02 11:18:43 +0000 UTC

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ElectricMaehem

45 % resentment 10 % terrible plans 0 % critical thinking 25 % righteous indignation 2 % flailing panic 10 % tenaciousness 8 % biceps

Jess Richards

Agreed with the above. The "45% resentment" thing was the best line so far in this chapter, IMO. I had to stop reading for a moment so I could picture his potential other ingredients.

ElectricMaehem

That was one of my favorite lines to write in this chapter as well. It nearly got cut and I had to move dialogue around to fit it in.

Ruben Strydom

"As a person, he is easily 45% resentment.” excellent! that line made me giggle


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