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Great Lakes and Expectations chp 1

🕑 Added 2017-08-30 07:32:58 +0000 UTC

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Omirao

It's really nice to see more of Jiraiya! I'm excited to read this! Regina seems like she has a good head on her shoulders, too--she tends to get kind of witty under pressure, doesn't she? I like her.

ElectricMaehem

Thanks! I had fun writing Jiraiya, but Regina gave me trouble. Her first incarnations were too weepy until I added her actual experience of the transition, so I'm glad to hear she came across well.

Anya

Nice! I really like this. The first scene with Jiraiya was awesome and I really liked Regina.


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