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Convent of Sin I
🕑 Added 2022-10-05 02:57:10 +0000 UTCIn the fall of 1944, Sasha joins the Convent of the Sacred Flame as a novice. For three months, she works night and day in service of the Convent to earn her keep. While cleaning in the convent's basement, she discovers a man that shouldn't exist inside a room that shouldn't be. The man offers her a chance to change her future, the lives of the other novices and nuns, and perhaps even the world beyond the Convent's walls.
Hi all!
So, as discussed in and under my the last Carnal Abbey post, that one pretty much went squirrelly on me. Sometimes you write a short novel and it's just a fucking mess. Once I reread through it, I made a list of things I wanted to change. I got into the range of rewriting 10+ chapters from the ground up before I put it in the proverbial drawer to come back to in the future.
Which put a damper on my release pattern, left the idea of the corrupt nunnery sex cult squatting in my brain, and generally left me in a moody funk. So, after a mental breather, I started a second swing at the concept. Rather than put this into the "chunk" format, which is how Carnal Abbey swerved in the first place, I'm going to treat this more akin to my normal episodic format. The idea is to distill down to more spice and less running narrative just to do the concept justice for my own sanity.
The first chapter is, as is typical with the start of a series, exposition heavy, even as I shear pretty quick to the point at the end. One of the issues I ran into with Carnal Abbey was going to big too quickly. The transformations and corruptions will happen more subtly and insidiously in this version. Lower stakes as well, the main character will be less "conquer/save the world" and more exist in the world but also be a sex demon with a sex demon harem.
This also pushed everything else in the pipeline off to the side. For all I've written in the past two months, maybe a tenth of it has reached the open retail. Half of its made it to here, and half of it is all jumbled up waiting to be properly organized and released. I was supposed to spend the last week unsnarling that, but instead I lamented my inability to remember an outline.
Anyway, ship is back on course. Full sail ahead. More Nymph tomorrow.
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Red Panda Seven
Well hot damn! Talk about a great pivot while keeping with a great idea. I'm in and can't wait for the next installment.
Thomas
I'll have to take a closer look after work
Quixerotic
Glad to have you! Limerick's stuff is always amazing. If you're entirely new to my work, there's a substantial backlog. Cow Daze, Pucklebirch, and City of Charming are all directly inspired by Limerick's style. The first two are in the 2021 dropbox folders, and City of Charming is on the website. For other general Breast Expansion/Milking stuff, anything from the Hucow Stories series or the Milktec series is guaranteed to be focused on that. Crimson Milk/Crimson Reborn remain good intro points with lots of breast expansion/growth/change throughout those series.
Thomas
Right. I signed up because Limerick said some good things about one of your other stories. A corrupted Nunery is something I've also wanted to see for a while. There is so much inspiration out there for this concept.
Quixerotic
Minor mention of body changes, but nothing overt. Most of the spicy focus is on a futanari shift at the end. More focus on breast stuff will happen in the next and subsequent chapters.
Thomas
So out of curiosity is there any kind of breast expansion, or anything like that in this chapter?
