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Neighborhood Bull WIP Chapters 7-8
🕑 Added 2022-05-11 00:42:23 +0000 UTCHi all. More of this unwieldy story. Couple of things about this set of chapters. First, they're probably the most "draft" version of a draft I've put on here. These chapters have a lot of explaining of things which is always less interesting than a doing of things. On revision, a lot of the dialogue in these chapters will be cut down or reworked. And, a great deal of the word choice and things like that will probably shift. Not sure why but I got obsessed with the words "would" and "could" and it screwed with my brain every time I used one of them.
Second, Neil jumped the queue, so he's featured in Ch. 8 rather than my initial goth girl plan. His story features some trans/gay/bi/queer stuff which is a little unusual for me and may be tonally out of whack once I go back and see how smoothly (or not) the individual characters flow from one chapter to the next. So, if you get to it and think, 'hey, wasn't this supposed to be about big boobed women getting addicted to Evan?' just know that I'm aware we're taking a few sharp turns.
Anyway, hopefully it's enjoyable. Naturally, in addition to all the talk, there is some hanky panky. If you have thoughts on the story feel free to let me know in comments or DMs. From here, I'll pull back on this a little and get out some other stuff over the next week. I wrapped up Ventitrax, so now I'm overdue for some entries into the anthology series. I'll get one or two of those up on this feed in addition to the other stuff this month.
More to come. Happy reading!
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John Door
I personally like the Neil events
