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The Trumpets of Mars (Imperium #2) - Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2022-03-20 16:40:56 +0000 UTC

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Idaho Spud56

Good chapter. Thanks.

Dennis Aston

I for one am happy with the progress and direction of the last couple of chapters. It can't all be war and action, yet neither can it be all character building. The story has good back and forth to this point although I am starting to want for the story to swing back in the other direction.

Sergiu Moscovici

I like your writing in general and this chapter is interesting. But I think that the action is moving way too slowly and you are getting bogged down into way too many details and personally building. Just my two cents as a reader


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