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IDWTBTHQ Chapter 121 - The Best Meal

🕑 Added 2022-05-31 22:28:07 +0000 UTC

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Valentino Conti Angeli

Don't worry, I plan for the rules of this "game" to be extremely limiting to what these godly entities can actually do. As I said, the story is about Marcus and other mortals, and I want to avoid literal Deus ex Machina.

Pawzom Lz

I really hope so as I find it far to common for authors to write themselves into a corner by involving gods, only to require far too much plot armor for the mortal mc to survive somehow. And with the gods introduced so far clearly being ''chess players'', I have to admit I am a little bit worried that another story I like will fall into the same trap.

Valentino Conti Angeli

I agree that even for me the explanation being "a god did it" feels like a lazy cop out most of the time. Rest assured, divine involvement is something I'm going to deal with carefully and sparingly, as the story is actually about Marcus and the other mortals.

Pawzom Lz

So my guess is then that the other reincarnators are pieces on a board played by the gods, and as such they have had points invested into them, but then there is the mention of true chance which is what Marcus represents since nobody placed her there, and she is just an accident, which is why she has no special ability. Not sure if introducing gods were the right thing tbh. Gods rarely bring much value to stories unless its a progression system or cultivation novel and godhood is something that can be achieved, but even in those cases the ridiculousness of the story often gets out of hand with running faster than light and stuff. And in stories where godhood is something the MC can never achieve they are this presence that can casually undo everything whenever they feel like it or if they are willing to pay a small price due to certain limitations/rules. It is often better when reincarnators are that just because of random chance, without the involvement of gods. Special abilities can be explained away by being the result of cosmic/multiuniversal energy nonsense. While all of the other reincarnators have different special abilities than their racial ones, they are also similar enough that they could just be explained away by being mutations that are the result of of the energy mentioned earlier. Ofc there have been some stories where gods are a great addition, I just find they are a failure most of the time. Hopefully they wont be in this story. That is however just my personal opinion.

Valentino Conti Angeli

Well spotted. Indeed, there is a reason for Marcus's lack of special power. I've dropped a hint about that in the bonus interlude (it's especially apparent if you keep the term "points" in mind).

Pawzom Lz

I didnt consider that. If that is the case and she is just an accident it would be better than the other alternative of the mc being weaker cause the mc is the mc.

Nilbog

Very nice ideas but I think the interlude is hinting that Marcus isn't a cheat he's just an accident rather than someone planted on Aos by the gods so him not having any uniquely or extra special abilities makes perfect sense in that regard

Pawzom Lz

Some ideas I have for what her special ability could be from strong to weak. 1: Marcus is able to store a portion of ''consumed prey's'' aura, the amount determined by how strong the creature was, how quickly it was consumed and how fast it is used to lay an egg with an aura drone that will have that aura accessible to it. If this is Marcus' ability it would make sense she does not know it yet as I dont think she has eaten something with a noticeable amount of aura and then immediately afterwards tried to create a drone with the unavailable aura genes. She has tried to create aura drones a while later but that could just be too late or not enough left hence it did not work. 2: Able to modify her own body with traits she has acquired from other species slowly over time that have reduced energy requirements proportional to her own aura(stronger she is the more/stronger traits she can have without her food requirement reaching absurd levels). 3: Able to temporarily sacrifice a portion of her own aura and grant the equivalent to a drone upon its birth so it has a similar amount to the temporarily sacrificed portion and can then use whatever aura traits Marcus gave it. Sacrificed aura will be very slowly regained. 4: Same as the above but the sacrificed aura will not start to regenerate until the drone in question is dead. 5: Vex drones with aura abilities will directly drain it from Marcus instead of having their own storage of it, meaning lower overall aura regen since its not a lot of different bodies that are regenerating aura. Would seem more in line with the fact that drones are in many ways similar to an extension of Marcus, kind of like hair she can move as has been mentioned before. Upside to this however is that they would still not appear in aura sense of other beings.

Pawzom Lz

Anak'si: Besides normal racial abilities, she's an arachnea(with her mind intact due to being reincarnator) with the special ability of being able to mind control spider creatures. +2 points from Arachnea body and special ability. Flyboy: Besides normal racial abilities, he gained the a bigger/stronger body due to having been born as an emperor + the special ability to predict the future to a degree. +2 points from Emperor body and special ability. Blue: Besides normal racial abilities, his ability to absorb aura from those he ate was dialed up to 11 and he gained the special ability to also gain memories from those he devoured. +2 points from quicker aura absorption and memory devour special ability. What is Marcus'? She seems to be getting the short end of the stick in that she did not get the massive powerful body of a queen(which means her racial ability is lower than what it should be) and so far we have seen nothing to indicate a special ability apart from her other racial ones unless I have missed it somehow? It is probably not the mental attack/control thing cause her mother did something similar to Marcus after her birth. I suppose Marcus' mental attacks could be stronger but when you take into account how physically weak she is compared to a normal Vex Queen, that would just be trading in one strength for another. Hardly a special ability. Also, all the other reincarnators special abilities are different enough from their normal racial ones that you can tell them apart. Anak'si can mind control spiders, Flyboy could predict the future to a degree and Blue could devour memories.

Nilbog

Upgrade Marcus to a carriage, Eisen, having one of your knights, your chief telemancer and his retinue ride around in a cart is a bad look even if it's pulled by Vex


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