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Chapter 568: Surge

🕑 Added 2025-06-12 23:45:00 +0000 UTC

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Chloe

Tyftc

KollegvomMirgan

I think Jace might fight alongside Derek against the Champions if he promises to fight him 1v1 after lol

Iron Akela

Thanks for the double release. I’m torn on Jace myself, and wouldn’t be opposed to him getting a void covered glaive to the head. But that’s lizard man deserved it!

Stoney

TFTC.

Dan

100% Silvie will Be his friend forever after that.

Khal Lee

Poor uninformed Darvin. . .

Denalo Zecon

Either I do not understand...or chapter 560 should be rewritten with five fortresses instead of 4. I think 5 fortresses would be an easy change, as long as it is written before big events on the main story continent.

SunriseCV

Ah. Dying State always removes any buffs, which battlelust technically is

Denalo Zecon

I am confused; how many fortresses are there? I had thought it was four fortresses. And there are only two continents? A natural planet should have more continents, however if the planet was engineered or terraformed then it means Dave did not bother with more design of the details. IE a bit of laziness as if you could design a planet would it have only two continents...or would it have more than two? Back to the fortress number question; the invaders are certain Derek cannot be on the continent they are on, specifically the continent Jace defeated the two assassins on, and that Darvin claimed the Fortress. But they are certain Derek is not on the continent Darvin is on. So if no one local has heard of Derek Hunt; they asked specifically about Derek not Ascending Monarch, then Jace is on the other continent, and the Queen is the nearest Guardian...so the Queen is also on the other continent. The problem is that it makes three Fortresses on the other continent and two on the main story continent; 5 total. But again I thought there were only four fortresses.

Kendal Bozant

"The Queen" is actually the elven queen on the "other continent" (and was introduced when champions were being selected). Derek is the "Ascending Monarch"

Denalo Zecon

The Queen is mentioned as being on the bottom of the list; that makes her the weakest Guardian. Also Derek did not call himself "Queen" but instead Ascending Monarch. So because Maria is pretty high on the list she could probably defeat the Queen in a one on one fight. I think the Queen has no other Guardians in her fortress so hopefully she is not killed, but surrenders; she is not described much but is at least not bad like the assassin sisters were.

Josh Cothran

Honestly he could have just let them keep attacking and healing him in that stupid torture plan the lizard guy had. -Cue infinite battlelust music-

SunriseCV

Honestly, Jace has been a favorite character of mine since I began planning him on chapter one. Other than Derek and Thomas, he was one of the first in my character list. I’m probably 60+% pantser, so some of my other favorite characters came out of nowhere. Like Marrick. I’d never thought about him until the chapter he was introduced, then he developed from there. It’s nice finally getting to spend time on Derek’s best friend. XD

SunriseCV

Wish I could tell you how many. Writing as a webserial, it seems like my plans never matter. Was hoping for 135k words or so for the book… at 180k right now.

Jordan

Jace about his business and I’m loving it. Keep it up SunriseCV you’re cooking man!

Salguod

Jace is ABSOLUTELY going to give that lizardman tail to Silvie. I bet Derek won't know it belonged to a person until it's too late. Also, anyone wanna take bets on which array Jace will get randomly teleported to?

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Walter Kimberly

Thank you for the double CV. I just have to say Jace is the weirdest character I have came across in a long time. You have to hate the guy because of his treatment of the protagonist, but you CV manage to, at least to me, make him out to be lonely. A battle freak yes, but lonely. It makes me think their battle will come down to Derek saying don’t attack my stronghold/ family, and we can make a deal. You lose, you go back to Earth. I lose, I leave this world “ascend”. After the beatdown, the victor just wants to fight again on later date

Salguod

Tftc! I wish I could forget you're dropping chapters for the system clash so I could wait until the war is over and binge it all but I can't help myself but to read them as they drop! Maybe I could if I knew how many chapters you expect this to take 👀

Ryan Smith

It should be the queen in her city. Sir brant and the old goblin in the other city. With the assassin sisters already losing.

Maria Klein

Go Jace! Nothing better than unintentionally helping a friend out. Can’t wait to see Amelia’s reaction when she finds out the “queen” is Derek .

Scott McCarthy

The queen must be arrogant as F. to not consolidate with the other guardians on the continent and defend their lone remaining fortress. Oh right their worlds elves...

Samuel Strode

Yes one of your own killed your champion and it sounds like it’s a permanent death too

Samuel Strode

Agreed double thanks

Jennifer Leigh

Who needs enemies when you have people like Jace?

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the double chapter release. Good ones.

Jrose81

Thank you for the double chapter!


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