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Chapter 561: Me? I'm Jace

🕑 Added 2025-05-29 23:43:01 +0000 UTC

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Lion3125

Yeah, exactly. Either there's somehow some really big unexplained gap between the elites Derek knows and those he doesn't, and they are just very far from the limit of the Davenresh System or it doesn't really feel like it fits. From what we know the universal system should be unable to support someone like him if he's close to the limit of the Davenresh system not just that of the Universal System

Chloe

Tyftc

Puggan Se

"the soldier’s fingers were actually so sharp that his hands pierced into his back.", the 2 "his" referring to different persons in the same sentence feels odd.

Braden Moody

I somehow dislike this chapter. We have the whole quality VS quantity bit, and I understand that Jace is an outlier, but this still doesn't make sense and is highly conflicting with the information given throughout the story before now.

Randi Reed

I like how much he cares about Derek. But his reason for caring is warped and messed up. Jace is definitely a Sociopath.

Christopher Lancaster

I hate Jace. I kinda get the persona but still, he sucks. I guess it's good that he's not 'evil'

Randi Reed

I really want to like Jace, but when he goes psycho battle maniac like that with peoples lives, it makes me want to hate him. I wish he was more clearly a good or bad guy. Out of all the characters, he’s the one I’m most conflicted about.

Jordan

Jace just being himself is great

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

Chewbacchus

He and Derek are going to have so much fun!

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Onyxfrost

Thanks for the chapter

Iron Akela

Nice! Looks like Jace is going to be a problem though

Samuel Strode

Nice


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