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Chapter 138: Ambush?

🕑 Added 2021-11-26 00:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Matthew Coburn

I think the pacing has been good. I just wished for more chapters haha. It makes it hard especially leaving it half way through a fight.

Stephen Pearson

Happy Thanksgiving, and thanks for the chapter!

TerrestrialOverlord

Hmm I agree maybe 15%. The pacing can be slow in some areas but it's mostly good pacing. We are relatively close to the beginning of the novel and this would be where you'd still all the weird pacing and info dumps...once we're familiar it'll be easy to skip time without going "the fack just happened ?"... I think we're almost at the point where timeskips will be acceptable and even expected..cheers fellow Americans, happy Thanksgiving and others bless up!

SunriseCV

I mean, I understand what you’re saying, but is a slow day to day pace all that different from those novels that give thousand year time skips? There’s also the fact that those who would just discover the story wouldn’t notice anything because they would be binge reading. I found that consistency is key. Also, I’m pretty sure I had a conversation that lasted a month in real time. It was one of the first ones with Stella. The day by day pacing is just how I like to write it since it’s kind of Slice of Life first, Power Portal LitRPG second. If that makes sense.

buca117

Happy Thanksgiving, yourself! Good chapter, but I'm definitely noticing a trend with your pacing. You release two chapters a week, so you really need to keep in mind how much real time passes compared to how much time passes in your story. Over the course of two weeks in real time, barely a day seems to have gone by in your story. I've seen worse discrepancies (one story I was following had one conversation take place across three months IRL) but you should really not consider that an upper bound.


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