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Chapter 103: Days Gone By
🕑 Added 2021-07-27 23:45:00 +0000 UTCChapter 103: Days Gone By
Derek sat in his room at the inn, going over all the information he had gained throughout the day. Silvi was doing fine, and he suspected that the only way he would be seeing her in the near future would be if he visited her in the kitchen.
He also admired Water’s swift actions. In less than a week, the man was acting on the advice he had received from Derek, and Clare was the perfect student. All Derek could see when he looked in her eyes was resolve. She didn’t act like a spoiled noble, either. Derek had a feeling that the girl would grow to be a great warrior.
His discussion with Walter also led to him learning about the academy. Derek had been wondering what to do with Thomas over the last few weeks. Sure, he could take him around and put him through dungeon after dungeon, but by doing that, the boy would come to rely on others more than he should.
The academy would be the perfect place for the kid. With everything that Derek had learned from novels of his previous world, nothing would help a naïve kid grow more than life at a magical academy. Of course, Derek would have to okay it with the boy’s grandparents first. By sending the kid to the academy, Derek would no longer be able to protect him.
I’m sure Richard and Delilah would be proud if Thomas went to the Capital to enter the academy. He didn’t think he would have a hard time convincing the couple. Before any of that, though, he would have to get Thomas to level 50. Shouldn’t be a problem. He’s already above level 30.
Derek’s decision about Thomas was not made rashly. Just by batting her eyelashes, the girl Thomas had been hanging around with was able to rid the boy of most of the training Derek had given him. One look and the kid had lost the survival instincts he picked up in the insect dungeon. One giggle and Derek’s words of warning had flown in one ear and out the other. Derek couldn’t help but sigh.
It was much easier to deal with Brandi and Clare. Maybe it’s true that girls mature much faster than boys. Even more so in a world full of systems and magic.
First, I have to make sure the kid doesn’t get himself killed before I talk to Richard. Derek had brought up the boy that Alicia had met outside the Adventurer’s Guild to Walter while they were dining. Based on the information given, Walter had informed Derek that ‘Clay’ was most likely Clay Torith, the City Lord’s son.
Derek had been doing everything he could to avoid having to meet the City Lord. Then Thomas ended up getting involved in a conspiracy with the man’s son.
At least it seems like Thomas still has a while before they act. Walter had mentioned that the City Lord was cautious the first time they met. It seemed like the same trait had been passed down to his son. According to Thomas, the boy had never mentioned my name to the girl. At least I can give him some credit for that… unless it’s just the oath at work.
Also, other than the first day and the morning after, I haven’t really made any appearances with Thomas. Other than having the one meal when I got back from the Adventurer’s Guild. Derek frowned. Though, I did cause quite a commotion when I showed Thomas the Crown Membership card… Oh well, if the girl investigates thoroughly, they won’t try anything on Thomas, and if she doesn’t, Thomas will learn a valuable life lesson.
Derek decided that he would avoid meeting with Thomas in public. He also went downstairs and found that one of the guests had checked out earlier, and he was able to get himself a separate room.
Derek laid on his back in his new room. All of his tasks in Torith had been completed. The only reason he decided to stay longer was because of Silvi’s cooking classes, and Thomas’s situation… he wanted to see how it played out. He would stay for at least a few more weeks before picking up Brandi and heading to Savannah.
Days passed by fast for Derek. For the most part, he did nothing other than relax. He took the occasional call from Alanah or Stella and visited Silvi on a couple of occasions. He didn’t visit often because he could just communicate with her at night because of their link. He did make his way over to Walter’s place to spar with Clare a few times.
The girl’s combat ability was rapidly progressing. Walter had even had a pair of small silver knuckles made just for her. When Derek wasn’t there, the old man had gotten Areyas or Bronson to spar with the girl whenever she needed. Derek was even more impressed with the girl the longer he got to know her.
Unfortunately, the City Lord had found out where Derek was staying at some point. Derek had slipped away from the man’s servants multiple times. Every time he came back, there would be an invitation slipped under his door, inviting him to dinner at the City Lord’s manor. Finally, Derek got tired of the annoyance and checked out of the inn. Thomas was still there, and it didn’t look like the City Lord’s servants had any inkling that the boy was somehow related to Derek.
During the weeks, Derek occasionally visited Thomas in secret and dropped hints warning him of others. His excuse for leaving the inn was that he was avoiding the City Lord and didn’t want the boy to also be harassed. He recommended that Thomas avoid making contact with or mentioning him.
Derek was now staying at a rustic inn in the commoner district called The Burnt Feather. The inn was clean, and it offered a decent breakfast. The owner was a mid level fire mage who once survived a griffon attack while out adventuring. On a mantle above the door there was a slightly singed feather that Derek assumed was from the griffon. Hence the name “The Burnt Feather.”
Derek had been a resident of this inn for a week now. He was currently sitting on the edge of the bed in his mediocre room when he felt an odd vibration from the storage ring on his finger. He’d come to know over the last two weeks that the vibration was the feeling of the communication crystal being activated.
Derek flipped his hand over and the red crystal appeared. The rune that was lit up this time was Alanah’s. Derek sighed before channeling his mana into the room and answering the ‘call.’
‘Hey, Alanah. What’s up?’ He said.
‘I was just contacting you to let you know that one of my ‘eyes’ spotted your boy heading out of the city with a girl and Malcolm’s boy.’ Alanah’s sensual voice rang in Derek’s mind, because of their occasional communication, any effect her normal voice would have had on Derek had disappeared.
Over the last two weeks, Derek had gotten tired of watching Thomas and waiting for the girl to make her move. He had asked Alanah if it was possible to have one of her Deathsworn keep an eye out for the kid, to which she readily agreed. Apparently, today was the day.
‘Oh, did you happen to learn what they are doing?’ He asked.
‘It looks like they are going east of the city to hunt some Horned Boars for a quest. The monsters in the area are all around level 50 or so and are scattered about around the area. It’s one of the safer hunting grounds by the city, but only those nobles close to Malcolm hunt there.There are a handful of guards trailing the group to make sure nothing happens to the lord’s son.’ She answered with a disinterested voice.
‘I thought controlling an area for your own gain was illegal.’ Derek said.
‘No. Controlling an area with a dungeon is illegal. It’s frowned upon, but what they are doing isn’t illegal. Edwin knows that his nobles need to have some benefit.’ She replied.
‘Edwin?’ Derek asked.
‘Oh. That’s the King’s name.’ She answered nonchalantly.
Derek shrugged like it didn’t matter. ‘Well, whatever. Thanks for letting me know. Is there anything else you need?’
The other end of the line was quiet for a moment. ‘Derek.’ Alanah said.
‘Yes?’
‘Try not to kill the boy… or Malcolm.’ She answered. ‘At least not yet. I’ve been very busy with your coffee and your Void Beasts… I’d rather not have to deal with a noble crying over his son’s death.’
Derek furrowed his brows. ‘I don’t see what me killing them would have to do with you.’ He said.
He heard a sigh come from Alanah. ‘We are friends, are we not?’ She asked.
‘Of course we are.’
‘Then what you do affects me. Do you see?’
‘I get it… I get it.’ He said. ‘I won’t kill anybody important. I guess it doesn’t matter, anyway. I’ll be there, so if they do act, I won’t let anything bad happen. It’s not my style, but I guess I could let them off with a warning, just this once… for you.’
‘Thank you. Let me know what ends up happening later. Now, I need to get back to working on these damn auctions. We’ll talk later.’ She said, then the crystal in Derek’s hand stopped glowing.
Derek put the crystal away and hopped off his bed. It was finally time to see what those kids had in store for Thomas. He hoped the kid would take the appropriate actions once they acted and make him proud. He also hoped that once everything was over, Thomas would come out stronger.
Comments
fbt
ty for the chapter. I don't mind Thomas as much at this pt; he seems pretty normal. I think we sometimes expect folks in fiction to make far fewer mistakes than most of us do IRL (ofc, people have pretty selective memories of their own failings, so the bias is hardly surprising). I also don't see any particular pattern yet vs gender, although there have been maybe a couple extra folks the MC found impressive that were fem (but, then, that may be his mindset), but not enough to seem too odd to me. He thinks fairly highly of a number of folks, including Walter, Bronson, Clare, Brandi, etc. He glosses over/fails to take any particular note of a ton of folks (again w/o any gender pattern that I see). "Yousa folks be projectin', Ima 'tinkin" -Jar Jar :)
fbt
monsters? oh...uh, yeah. Monsters! right. That. (cough cough) ;)
A B
Well, I'm liking the story, although I do wish Thomas would finally take a hard look at himself and how he's approaching everything as if it was what he wanted it to be and not what it is. He lives in a harsh world where delusions and being off in his own world would get a person dead, fast.
Christian Mordal
Personally, I hope he sends Thomas off to school, and takes the Rayna with him on adventures. She was far more interesting as a character than Thomas has been so far, in my opinion.
自由
I appreciate Thomas being a stupid teenager. Still hope he is going to make Derek proud.
SunriseCV
Um… Derek’s never talked shit about Thomas to Silvi, at least I’m pretty sure. Silvi has called Thomas an idiot and such, but Derek has never agreed with her. He even chided her for calling him a mount. When they talk about Thomas, it was in terms of her protecting him. At least if my memory serves me correctly. It’s too late for me to jump back on my computer and research. I’m pretty sure that he has kept most of his negative thoughts about Thomas to himself.
OrigamiKnife
Because drive, ambition and assertiveness are reserved for other characters and the fact that Derek talks mad shit about him behind his back with Silvi, who is essentially a parasite, only exacerbates the issue
SunriseCV
Therein lies the fault Derek has with Thomas. Brandi’s father died in her arms which gave her the drive to create items to protect her loved ones. Thomas lost his parents, but it was just them going out and not coming home one day. Thomas’s only motivation is to get stronger and adventure. Both traumas are terrible to experience, but they hit different. Thomas was also much younger when his parents died. Derek wants Thomas to succeed. Technically, Thomas is a big success by Cydarian standards already. Rare class at level 30 by the age of 13 would be considered a great. He also has a natural talent with spears. Silvi is… Silvi… For the most part, Derek speaks with Thomas as a man when they are together. He does deride him internally a bit, but never says anything blatantly bullying just because. As for the male v female genius/power ratio, I try to keep it pretty normal. Clare just happened to be a girl. It was a coin flip whether Walter said niece or nephew at the time, and her gender wouldn’t change her character development. Walter and Stella are similar in strength, Walter would win in a fight, though. He has the experience and wisdom. Alanah is the only true genius Derek has encountered.
OrigamiKnife
I guess the main issue I have is the treatment of Thomas, we are introduced to him very early in the story and we see quite a bit from his perspective and I find it extremely irksome that our other principle characters treat him like shit. the fact that neither Derek or Silvi give him even a modicum of respect they constantly deride him and treat him like shit and he is the butt of some joke or mercilessly derided in very nearly every chapter and then we're introduced to another character and the respect is instant. Thomas and Brandi have both undergone similar life altering events, while this catalyzes Brandi's development the death of people he has known his whole life seems to have had no impact on Thomas in any meaningful way.
SunriseCV
Whether you end up peacing out or not, thanks for reading. I really do appreciate it.
OrigamiKnife
Yeah, this looks like it's going in the Randidly Ghost hound direction, every male character besides the MC are stupid and pathetic and all the women are super geniuses, I'm out
ducksgoquack
Eitherway Tommie is probably the most human of all the chars in this story. Strives for better, makes mistakes, learns, makes more mistakes, learns. Dealing with psych problems falls for a girl who is aggressively pursuing him. Most likely his first experience with women. Honestly, Derek is probably one of the worst guys to be your wingman.
ducksgoquack
Feel like he is being a lil harsh on tommie boy.. also Dereks lack of experience with girls that age is… well… to be understood. Still feels like he is putting the girls on a pedes… hmmm two girl geniuses one “retard” lil boy.... Come to think of it are any females in this story not wondrous?
Cory Newton
Who amongst us hasn't gone on a dodgy quest to kill monsters because a girl asked us?
Stephen Pearson
Thanks for the chapter:-)
Kenneth
woo we finally see what there plan is.
