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Chapter 116: Fury

🕑 Added 2021-09-09 23:45:59 +0000 UTC

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TerrestrialOverlord

My condolences to the Torith family for their loss, the city lord wasn't a nice guy, but I wonder how a voidbeast entered his castle, and who knew they we're bisexual.

SunriseCV

Wait, next week is the flash back chapter of when Derek had to struggle to find toilet paper and hand sanitizer back in 2020 when he was on Earth. Here’s an excerpt. Derek was frantic in his search for sanitary products. He’d hit up every supermarket and dollar store in the Charlotte area. Finally, he pulled up to the final place he could think of. An old, near abandoned Target. He didn’t have much hope, but his sister needed that hand sanitizer, and dammit, he was going to find some. Derek slammed the door of his beat up Chevy and marched into the store. It was a ghost town. It was near empty, there wasn’t even a Barbie left on the shelf. *It is suppose to go out of business next week.* He thought. He looked around, only seeing one employee left working. He began to walk over to her in his futile attempt ask about sanitizer. But, just as he took a step towards the lady, he saw it. One bottle of Purell sitting alone on a back shelf. He smiled and his face brightened. He had found the only bottle of Purell for sale in the county. He let out a breath and took a step forward. But to his horror, his eyes locked on to another customer’s who made the same discovery. Derek bolted forward, but so did his enemy. He was fast, but she had a fierce look in her eyes. He could only pray that he arrived first.

SunriseCV

Yeah, it was an experiment as I wanted to test showing the same thing from two perspectives. I wanted show Stella ‘beating around the bush’ about what she had to say, and how it all seemed odd to Derek. I also wanted her version of events, then what actually happened. I probably won’t try anything like that again unless I figure out a less confusing, more seemless way. A book I was reading gave me the idea to show the same thing from different perspectives. It was translated wuxia, I really shouldn’t try to use their examples.

Kevin Caffrey

It was a bit awkward having the first third of the chapter overlap the end of the previous chapter, but I liked the version of events in this chapter better. I suggest editing the previous chapter to remove the cliff if you want to keep this chapter as-is, so that the story flows better for people who later read those chapters back to back.

Logan

Well now I have to wait until next week to see Derek fuck shit up.

Kevin Ramos

*cocks void shotgun* And I have another 47 cartridges to go through. Derek probably.

Christian Mordal

The city lord seems to have inherited a fatal case of stupid.

PlasmaticPi

Well this is gonna be some fun chapters. Can't wait to see the City Lord and his father and son die.


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