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Chapter 78: Plans

🕑 Added 2021-04-29 23:45:01 +0000 UTC

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SunriseCV

I do that a lot it seems. I must change my ways

Kevin Caffrey

There’s nothing wrong with having some ebb and flow in the plot, as it makes the action bits that much more impactful. If every chapter was filled up with Dragon Ball Z style action, it would get old fast. As long as reasonable plot lines are introduced in the slower parts, I think it works. The last few chapters were wrapping up loose threads with the prior arc, and now some seeds are planted about the next arc (conflict with the city lord, finding a place to settle). I think the pace is fine, it just feels slow in a serial format where you have to wait a few days for the next chapter.

TerrestrialOverlord

The story is slowing :( more doing more dev, moar moar moar, monsters, loots, dungeons...killing nobles.....sweet sweet smell of noble bloods

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Also, pretty sure you didn't mean Silvi in 'I still need to head over to the Crown and talk to Silvi about'...


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