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Of Sisters and Shadows – Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2022-03-07 13:22:38 +0000 UTC

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Agrippa

Thanks! Truth be told, I really need to consult the dictionary on what that whole "taking a break" thing actually means, because... well, the month's schedule looks to be filling up rather quickly. I also liked writing Amy's perspective, though I think it could've done with a bit more snark--sadly, circumstances weren't up to it. About the missing Persona bits, don't worry too much about it: I'm making a lot of things up to fit the way I think things work, and some concepts aren't really in the game. No Shadow has, as afar as I know, ever called itself a 'One,' that's a made-up concept that will be explained when things progress. About the wings, I just wrote a small rant about it over on Discord, but some of it can be summed up as me recycling a concept I had for another story, wanting an excuse to turn Dragon into a dragon-girl, and Amy already having blueprints for wings for humanoids stored in her brain. There's also the slight issue of me liking biology enough to write this chapter, but being far, far from an expert. Let's just say Amy's found a way to cheat at signal transmission (gold strands coated in a non-reactive protein shell to bridge large distances?).

Damon Fitzgerald

This was a pleasant surprise. Wasn't expecting much this month. Really enjoyed it although I am guessing there are some Persona things I am missing. Really curious about Dragon though. I assume this is now the only copy of Dragon? Not so sure about the wings though. I really like that Dragon has wings but storing brain matter in them has me dubious. The distance signals have to travel could cause some problems as neurons do have quite a bit of lag over distance. It also adds a second very vulnerable area over the skull. I would likely have just tried to enlarge the skull a bit first then add some brain matter in the upper chest. Was also good to see from Amy's perspective. It is a really funny and obviously biased perspective to see things through. Hope for a few more like it.


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