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Wake-up Call – Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2021-12-15 09:08:12 +0000 UTC

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Agrippa

I try to keep the quality consistent (and glad to hear I manage, at least in the Worm-verse), I just wonder if it would have been better for me to focus all of that energy on a single story... Ah, well, it's not like there's a single one I'm currently writing that I don't want to continue: all of them have allowed me to explore something different, so far, so I will take it as my own training montage.

Damon Fitzgerald

I only read your worm stuff so far as I am not familiar with the other works but it seems to work for you so far. Wake Up Call does have a good a very quick update schedule and the quality is consistently high(this is the first time I have complained about something and it is fairly minor). Maybe the works you focus on less might suffer but it doesn't seem to be impacting Wake Up Call anyway.

Agrippa

Not at all, this is great feedback! Really, I'm basically new to the serial format (and seriously rusty in prose after years only writing scripts), so I miss glaringly obvious things like these from time to time. Sometimes I wonder if I should have focused on a single story rather than spreading myself over multiple ones to keep my focus and the reader's attention, but at the same time I'm learning a lot from the different and varied things on my plate, so... *shrug* Pros and cons.

Damon Fitzgerald

I must admit to being a little annoyed when I first read this. It was well written and I enjoyed it but I thought a whole scene for it was a bit excessive. I have thought about it a bit more though and I think the weekly update format just has me a bit impatient for plot and has skewed which bits I enjoy more. I suspect if there were another 5 chapters after this I would have enjoyed it far more. Probably not the most useful or nice comment. But yeah probably best to keep doing what you are doing and ignore me. I still enjoyed the chapter and will probably appreciate it more on a reread.

Agrippa

They would get on like a house on fire. And Llisa would have an awful inferiority complex regarding Haruno, what with her being an "unaugmented" genius... Damn it! Stop giving me ideas! Also, thank you. I literally couldn't do all this without all of you.

Crimson Grave

I only found a single grammatical error. 'Then I look up and see her looking down at me, a not of pleading on her face that I’ve never seen before, not on Taylor, not the always composed girl.' A 'note' of pleading. That out of the way. I, as per usual at this point, LOVED the chapter. Holy crap did I love it. Also, this Lisa would be best buds with Hachiman... Also be his best wingwoman that ISN'T involved with him that way. That seems taken by Iroha and Komachi depending on which variation of your fic we are talking about. XD


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