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Of Sisters and Shadows – Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2021-11-13 07:37:05 +0000 UTC

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If I wasn't paying for this, I'd definitely fund a Miss Militia/Armsmaster/Dragon fic

Agrippa

Thank you very much! Great feedback overall, and I’m certainly taking notes. Regarding Lisa and Vicky’s voices, I think the main difference will remain that Lisa has this effervescent, almost harried energy about her that comes from her overactive mind and constant dialog with Power. The Lisa in this fic will be very different when she finally appears, so I hope it won’t be much of an issue, given that they aren’t even in the same continuity--I’ll just have to work extra hard at keeping them separate. About MM and Dadmaster, I fear I must clarify that was just Amy trolling them and Vicky latching on their reactions to the topic as possible gossip-fodder. Or ship-teasing from Wake-up Call. One of those. (That Armsie Isekai spin-off keeps being tempting…)

Damon Fitzgerald

Great Chapter! So many great things. I quite like this dramatic and unafraid Amy. Well mostly unafraid as we saw she still has some reservations with brains. The shapeshifting into Piggot was hilarious as well as Armsmaster and Miss Militia losing their memories after hooking up. Your Vicky does sound a bit like your Lisa but as you said there are quite a bit of similarities. I think the two big differences are the fact that Lisa lived on the streets for a bit and then was forcefully recruited makes her attitude to villainy quite different to Vicky's more black and white view. The other big difference is their powers. Vicky being an Alexandra type(and now even more invincible) whereas Lisa being a squishy thinker will change them a bit but mainly in their approach to conflict So you can use those situations to emphasize differences if you feel the need.

Agrippa

Glad yo think so! About your questions, let's just say there's been some massive brainstorming going on and I may use the SMT elements a bit more blatantly than originally intended while remaining true to the premise.

very interesting setup, I wonder how our Master-Stranger duo are going to get used to the fog if they have no targets? I doubt you're going to use the Undersiders if you're already having trouble differentiating between Vicky and Lisa. Is Rune going to be our first teammate? Aisha? Parian?


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