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Beta QQ5

🕑 Added 2023-10-18 01:47:29 +0000 UTC

Comments

bee

I love this story so much! I definitely liked the choice of including what’s happening outside of the games so we can gauge if Jungkook’s true intentions. I think getting to see Jungkook’s perspective of what comes after the games would also be interesting. :)

Te

Regarding where you should go next, maybe there could be an excerpt in a future chapter from JK’s POV regarding how he felt when he first laid eyes on Y/N? Another plot point could be how JK and Y/N actually execute their plan in offing Team One. Again, these are just ideas that were buzzing in my head. Your creativity is admirable in its own right — hence the reason why I love this story so much! 😁

Te

Thank you so much for not abandoning QQ! I am over the moon that you are continuing to add more depth to this amazing story. I love that you introduced key background players and the overarching tone you have set for the remainder of the series. Seeing Y/N get some fire in her belly when the girl from One was verbally attacking her was long overdue. I’m so excited to see where things develop from here. Happy writing! ❤️❤️