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Chapter 138

🕑 Added 2025-06-13 17:53:00 +0000 UTC

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Jason Hardman

TYFTC! Some typos and other grammar issues: “Indeed. They through the entire body.” -> They run through the entire body. In every other person, there are no holes or cavities in their bodies or blood that aren’t supposed to be there. -> if kept as is, then "isn't" instead of "aren't", with a comma after "bodies", but could also rearrange the sentence to something like: In every other person, there are no holes or cavities in their bodies that aren’t supposed to be there, no blood in the wrong place. Edit - just realised, maybe it should say "blood vessels"? In which case you're just missing that comma I think. “Since it starts in the brain, lets call it the false nervous system, for the false system for short. -> or the false system for short.

Erebus Dread

Oh wow. I wonder if the visions part of the skill is going to come into play. Either way, I'm interested on what the experience will be with his different soul.


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