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[Progress] // Final Storylines Pt. 2
🕑 Added 2020-06-29 10:43:52 +0000 UTCHello Friendos~!
Okay, time is short since I realllllyyy want to push a new build in the next couple of days (I actually took some days off of work JUST to get it done... yeah I'm really not good at this whole work/life balance thing...), so let's just dive in~
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[ All the writing progress checked off in Trello ]
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So where we at?
To jump right to it, we're done writing all the dialog based on the story-lines we created, which include the multiple endings, "choice scenes" and deeper lore questions. I'll go into a bit more detail, but basically we're ready to put it all together in the game~
Quick note, this is for the original waifus, since I'm hoping to do more lore polls for the new girls. I want you to be a part of making this game as much as possible. :)
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Ohh can I see?
Yup! Like I mentioned, I'm going to be focusing on getting the build together so you can see the new scenes and endings in action (including the new expression animations we've been working on), but if you'd like a preview of what to expect, I've attached the Twine project of the story-lines, download it below~
Quick note, you can open Twine projects with your browser
As with everything, this stuff is always work-in-progress, so expect edits. I'm also open to feedback if you'd like to share your thoughts!
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[ What the Twine project looks like in a browser ]
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Hun-Ni & Nene Story-lines
In the last Story-line update, these story-lines were still being written. Nene had to be written from scratch since she wasn't complete in the Beta. As for Hun-Ni, she was rewritten to fit her lore poll based on your feedback.
Well you can see now, those story-lines are now finalized and the finished dialog has been written (along with the other girls).
You can get a deeper look at those story-lines below but I did want to note that the poll for Hun-Ni was pretty close, so I opted to go for an "in-between" story. It makes it clear she has trouble communicating and only alludes to the reason why.
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[ Click here for a closer look at Hun-Ni and here for Nene ]
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[ The poll was close enough to find a middle-ground for her story ]
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Choice Scenes and Multiple Endings
I touched on this work briefly in the last Story-line update but here's a bit more detail on how they'll look.
The choice scenes will pop up after completing one of the girls' quests. From there, you'll get to see more of their story and conflict and let you influence them. Depending on those choices, you'll get a certain ending.
In the unfinished flash Beta of the game, the endings were dialog scenes accompanied with some still imagery (kinda like a moving storyboard). The endings in this game will be similar to that.
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[ Choosing how to respond to her conflict ]
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[ How the endings looked like in the (unreleased version) of the Beta ]
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What's to come?
A new a build! I need to get back to the cave and get it done. I've already spent too much writing all this stuff out... Sorry about that >.<
Anyways, I hope your evening is much more relaxing than mine is.
Much luv, and please take care of yourself~
- Moosh
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