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Healer Arc 2 -- Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2026-01-08 22:34:14 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

That is definitely something to consider -- I may have him revisit this with some more thought about whether or not he should actually try to find her. For now, though, it gives him something to work toward :)

Lonnie

I understand that it hasn't been that long for him, but pining after a person when it's been 200 years is setting him up for failure. That's like, "hey, we fooled around as kids for a few weeks. I know it's been 60 years and I see you have a family, did you miss me?" Again, I understand that it's a goal to distract him so as not to focus on the trauma and loss he's suffered. It just breaks the flow of the story for me every time I see that. Thanks for the chapter.

Jonathan Brooks

I'll fix that -- thank you!

Jonathan Brooks

Thank you -- I'll get that fixed :)

TjStorm

He also got ride of Tethered Tease for a similar reason He also got rid of Tethered Tease for a similar reason

Daniel Francis

Evening. "not see quite as powerful" > "not seem quite as powerful"


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